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Let's get serious

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Let's get serious

Million people in this world
with aspirations touching the sky
different  role a man plays in life
has countless blessings n insults.

hoped for the best result
 but had to face the worst
was fully prepared for the test
but fate had something else for me.

loved him/her whole heartedly
despite,broke my heart repeatedly.
doubt about the fidelity of the spouse
or a battle to fight against disease.
 
feeling like hell as come upon u
no friend to share the grief
innumerable thoughts to end life
summoning the courage to do so.
 
when the prob totally surmounts u
and heart is crying ocean of tears
when pain the inside is burning
then plant a seed of confidence in heart.

nourish the seed with self trust and  care
even the snow on the top will
be at your feet one day.
 optimism is not being positive 
 all the time but smiling at failure 
and ready to march forward with smile.

what is the use of love 
which doesnt reciprocate properly
instead kills u with its memories n presence
nothing in this world is beautiful as life.

no problem  is so big enough
to be foolish to end lives.
believe me,there is no man
who has not cried and wiped tears.

life is a parcel of tears and  smiles
no second ceases but passes
enjoy all the moments 
and do not cut them short.

man is the most intelligent being
but very foolish to commit suicide
kill the problem  and throw it away
but not the wonderful life.

 To see the fairytale of our lives
hero should last till the end
fighting all the odds in the journey
and enjoying its beauty.

  (A Poem for all,stating that suicide is not a permanent solution for problems in life but a coward's act.Value the gift given to us by god and remember that problems are also passing clouds and wont stay with us forever.)

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  1. Date: 2/6/2013 2:46:00 AM
    A powerful and thought provoking write Kenisha. well done and thanks for stopping by.

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 2/6/2013 6:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much for your words :)
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 1:02:00 AM
    your piece opens up so many questions and ideas to ponder. I enjoyed the soulful read and will probably read it again .. remarkable, kenisha.;) hugs!

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 10/27/2012 9:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much for your wonderful comment ,have a great weekend :)
  1. Date: 10/14/2012 4:13:00 AM
    A passionate verse...Well stated! Cynthia

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 10/14/2012 8:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much .have a great day :)
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 3:59:00 PM
    Emotional poem, you write very well Kenisha. - I like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 10/10/2012 11:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much and i will try to keep up my work.love and have a great day :)
  1. Date: 9/30/2012 7:39:00 AM
    A very moving and emotional write, my dear Kenisha! Thank you for sharing this morning! Big hugs, Jack

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 10/1/2012 3:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much ,have a great day :)
  1. Date: 9/28/2012 8:55:00 PM
    Kenisha, i've enjoyed reading your poem this morning! Thank you so much for sharing and for stopping by reading my advance present (poem) to our dear friend here, PD. Have a nice day always!!!!

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 9/29/2012 1:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much for the comment.i wish all the best to both you :).
  1. Date: 9/26/2012 8:43:00 AM
    "Nothing in this life is as beautiful as life" And " no problem is big enough foolishly to kill lives" These lines are philosophical and deserve to be written at the back of ones mind, am mad at this write up, writer, am going to rate this immeadiately..... Thanks for sharing And to hell with problem that can make me sad, talk more of suicide.

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 9/27/2012 7:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for your words.i am glad that this write has a very positive impact on the mind.have a great time.
  1. Date: 9/19/2012 9:39:00 PM
    Kenisha, your poem was very moving... , thank you for sharing your wonderful verse* good night :-) Linda aka~ PD

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 9/20/2012 1:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Linda :).have a great day.
  1. Date: 9/19/2012 4:10:00 AM
    Kenisha, A passionate verse, perhaps it will help some sad soul. (I invite you to read my verse, "On Being Green"...same subject. Cynthia

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 9/19/2012 8:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much.i will be very glad if this really helps a sad person.have a great day.