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When Darkness Falls

When Darkness Falls When darkness falls across the land Are we able to understand? That light is still shining through Shedding its hues of rays onto all man We never know where darkness will show Though we’re aware that darkness doesn’t glow Like the light which shows hope in everything we see In every heart of someone we know When darkness falls into our lives what do we do? We wait patiently for the light to come shining through So we may close our eyes once more in total peace Knowing that behind the darkness, hope is always is waiting for me and you.
Contest: Night-Dark-Black Sponsor: Craig Cornish By: Gail Doyle

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  1. Date: 10/9/2012 9:36:00 PM

    GREAT POEM GAIL ,I HAVE NEVER GIVEN INTO THE DARKNESS IN MY LIFE,I STILL SEE THE LIGHT SHINING THROUGH,YOUR POEM SAID IT ALL FOR ME, TYU CAROLANN

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 10/10/2012 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Carol, thank you for enjoying my poem When Darkness Falls. Love, Gail
  1. Date: 9/19/2012 6:01:00 AM

    Nice Rubaiyat... Good luck in the contest... Terry

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 9:44:00 PM

    Interesting perspective and also form of poetry which I was not familiar with. Good luck in this contest as well! Caroline :)

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 6:45:00 PM

    Craig should like this entry because I like it. Good write as usual Gail.

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 5:32:00 PM

    This is such a beautiful write for such a dark contest! Of course I took my poem down the dark night and dismal route, but you probably guessed that already haven't you? I really enjoyed how you brought hope into the darkness, that light will eventually make it's way in, that is really awesome my friend! This is an extremely delightful and well written poem! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 5:03:00 PM

    Nice work..Im so behind in my comments..hope I havent missed to many of your poems. BG

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 9/18/2012 5:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Barbara, it's OK. I've been not doing good on commenting either, life is distracting me. Thanks for stopping by though. Luv, Gail
  1. Date: 9/18/2012 4:55:00 PM

    I agree Gail with a holistic heart we need not give up, crossing over darkness is the ever lasting light, love, vie

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 9/18/2012 4:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks sweetie for commenting on my poem When Darkness Falls. Luv, Gail