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Hip Hip Hurray-Debbie's Birthday


Debbie's birthday Hip Hip Hurray, all ku no play National ku day! Hip Hip Hurray gift some haiku, National ku day I write,you too! Gift some haiku chocolate no more, I write you too one,two,three,four! Chocolate no more cake of haiku, one,two,three,four haiku in a queue! Cake of haiku mind your syllables, haiku in a queue how many candles? Mind your syllables not less not more, how many candles behind the back door:) Not less not more must be perfect, behind the back door dump all mistakes! Must be perfect all ku no play, dump all mistakes Debbie's birthday!! © kash poet ============000============= *Wish You a Very Very Happy Birthday Debi. Placement:1st; (September 2012) Contest: It's My Birthday Sponsor:Debbie Guzzi =============000=============

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  1. Date: 10/2/2012 1:42:00 PM

    KASH, , Congratulations with your FUN LOVING POEM for Debbie's "It's MY Birthday " contest bash... had fun reading all her happy dandy winners. Always~ xox~ PD

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 9:41:00 PM

    Oh, you are so smart... well done. Lee

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 6:45:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 5:47:00 AM

    how delightfully funny, kashi.. super congrats on your win!.. :) huggs

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 10:55:00 PM

    Many congrats Kash for this win.

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 10:11:00 PM

    BIG CONGRATULATIONS FRIEND KASH FOR WINNING 1ST PLACE ON DEBBIE’S CONTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY ALWAYS!! (^_^)

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 1:46:00 PM

    Big congrats once again kash she deserves all of these lovely poems xx

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 12:31:00 PM

    Thank you from the bottom of me heart. Mr. Kash ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 2:36:00 PM

    This is so sweet. I know she will like it. Is it going to the contest? Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 11:56:00 PM

    Nice string Kash, they are really hard to write.

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 8:56:00 AM

    Oh, I hope Debbie saw this one! How clever!!

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 2:34:00 PM

    great write,,,, and bright blessings to Debbie,,, she explained to me how to write haiku ,,,, good luck on your win ;}

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 11:34:00 AM

    great write, especially as a pantoum. they aren't easy! good luck in the contest :)

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 9:49:00 AM

    wow!!! best birthday poem for debbie :) Good luck!

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 10:51:00 AM

    lol, love this witty write, Kash - I know Debbie will love it too : )

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 8:48:00 AM

    i got a greeat kick from this, kashi... debbie will surely enjoy your greeting!.. fabulous!!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 7:44:00 AM

    this is very very clever. I think she will LOVE it. I know I DO!!

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 5:33:00 AM

    a wonderful poem Kash, and very deserving too!!!!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 1:55:00 AM

    :)) wow! awesome pantoum for Debbie. We'd order a haiku cake from the poetry shop for her. Great dedication for our sweet Debbie.

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 4:58:00 PM

    Oh my! Got to go wish her a Happy Birthday, nice haiku's Kash you never disappoint us with your haiku's they are the best, love and light vie

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 4:58:00 PM

    wow what a fabulous card for our birthday poet Kash .. a super treat of a write she will jump for joy .. good wishes for a big win but this one takes the cake luv ..

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 2:47:00 PM

    Oh Yes,,, Debbie... hip hip horray... happy birthday DG.. this is wonderful of you... love your Libra Spirit..... xox~pd

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 2:32:00 PM

    So sweet that you make a fuss on the birthdays "girl". I say HOORAY!! oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 1:27:00 PM

    She is a brilliant poet I must say Kashi! And this poem is quite the special write my friend! I love that you chose a Pantoum form to write your poem, she will like that too! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 1:20:00 PM

    awwwh, kashi... this one calls for a celebration!... such a winsome write!... winner!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 1:16:00 PM

    Oh Dada, what a cool and fun write this is, reading this was like being right in the middle of festivities...love this birthday cardof yours...simply the best...areyou having fun with the festival ?fireworks all around...

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 1:06:00 PM

    She is my first haiku teacher here!

    khan Avatar yasmin khan Date: 9/18/2012 1:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    She is mine too..she helped me write haiku...and you have helped too Dada!