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Golden Sunrise

I’m sorry for the way you are
makes me feel like I’ve gone too far
and now your love as turn to hate
I now a victim of our fate.
It wasn’t planned this life this hour
yet the shadows cast bleak and dour
a Golden sunrise oh so brief
fuels again a life of grief.

© Harry J Horsman 2012   

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  1. Date: 10/31/2012 5:38:00 AM
    I am so sorry it has taken me this long to get back to you on the comments you have left on my poetry. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a comment Harry. It truly was appreciated. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 3:12:00 AM
    very nice write Harry ;}

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 2:36:00 PM
    very strong emotions flowing. great write! warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 7:50:00 AM
    In such situation, victim of fate is wonderful words. Really nice poem of tragedy with aspiration. Destruction paves the way of construction. Thanks for your comments on my write my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 7:11:00 AM
    Day bringing the sorrow again. What a lovely way to depict it, Harry. I was glad to see you had two new poems up today. (check line three I think some typos there. I had forgotten the "R" in my last poem's word Streaks and had written: violet steaks in the sky. haha

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 7:23:00 PM
    Good descriptive wording and rhyming. The title to this write looks like a good name for a diner.

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 3:49:00 PM
    HOLA! WOW... YOUR POEM IS COMES WITH A SLIGHTLY TWISTED IMAGE... All the sun means to me is TIMES... always a pleasure stopping by... xox~pd

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 3:25:00 PM
    DEEP EMOTION EXUDES FROM WITHIN HARRY LUV .. AT TIMES WE DO SEAL OUR OWN FATE WITH HATE RATHER THAN LOVE .. I VOTE FOR LOVE ALWAYS MY FRIEND .. GUESS THAT MAKES ME A "SWEETHEART"..

    horsman Avatar harry horsman
    Date: 9/18/2012 3:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    i guess it does sweetheart
  1. Date: 9/18/2012 2:05:00 PM
    Very nice harry!Love the ending very much.

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 1:39:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading this one even though it has a sad overtone to it..Very expressive and emotive work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 7:40:00 AM
    I don't know how anyone's love could turn to hate against you harry boy, you will always be in my heart at any rate.. superb write xx

    horsman Avatar harry horsman
    Date: 9/18/2012 3:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    and in mine, thanks for your lovely comment!!!
  1. Date: 9/18/2012 6:39:00 AM
    This is a brilliant, simply brilliant write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this fine poem this morning! What a powerfully sad write Harry, but extremely effective poem! This is a wonderful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 5:28:00 AM
    Sad, and beautiful. So much of life isn't planned for sure..

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 4:58:00 AM
    Simply wonderful Harry! Terry (though sad)