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Getting everything together

Getting everything together has been hard in my life,
every time something gets better, 
something else turns out not to be right.

I try to see the good in things,
but instead all i see is bad,
even on my weakest days,
I try my best to not be sad.

Keeping my head up is a struggle at times,
because of the negativity i think in my head,
or thinking back to hurtful things my mother has said.

But the past is the past,
and i need to learn how to leave it at that,
but sometimes it can be hard to forget,
especially the words with the most intensified hit.

I have so many blessings to be thankful for,
and a great family that could not be better,
getting everything together is going to be tough,
but i'll keep working on it and get there soon enough.



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  1. Date: 9/19/2012 10:25:00 AM
    A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Crestfallen. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol 09/19/2012

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    Date: 9/19/2012 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much!! and yes all of these poems are so inspiration. Makes me wish i was that great! I like your poems! :D their great.