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Lingering Taste of passion

Darling can you hear the beating of my heart as you lay upon my chest fingers locked together as I feel the warmth of your breath caressing my neck our embracing moment has left a lingering taste of passion in my mouth I won’t forget our moments we share for our passions run like the river runs down the mountains I can see my reflection in your eyes see your soul leap for joy as I look deep into the portal of your soul and there I will bring you a kiss an embracing of our lips eyes closed in the moment of passion never for gotten in words unspoken but by your taste that lingers so

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  1. Date: 9/28/2012 9:17:00 AM

    You have inspired me to continue writing my dear Amanda!!! Excellent piece! regards INK-U-SCRIPT

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 11:08:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Amanda. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

    Shelton Avatar Amanda Shelton Date: 9/19/2012 11:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you hun and the same to you. My inspiration in life is life and the sun shines brighter then any morning star. Shine on my morning star.
  1. Date: 9/17/2012 3:07:00 PM

    Mangling by starts the poems full course and in it's full glory - may substitute breast for chest ?

    Shelton Avatar Amanda Shelton Date: 9/17/2012 6:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you hun and for the idea I thought about using breast instead but I stuck with chest. Because it's a guy not a woman talking to his lover. :)