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Blue Rain

Blue Rain Blue rain finds a way to penetrate one’s soul From the cruelty in the coldness through the winds that blow Tears that appear have somehow touched the rain Reflecting to a world where some people inflict so much pain When it touches the ground everything of life will become blue Translucent rain that paints a world’s canvas of what cruelty from people can do Bullying takes the lives of people who are both intelligent and unique A crime created by those filled with deep jealousy and insecurities Too many hearts have reached a premature death because of all the pain Though, still showing their tears in the cries through the blue rain Rain that penetrates towards the earth in a totally different way One to gather your attention that another life has been taken away Some adults carry their bullying all the way from their childhoods For they refuse to see the emptiness within themselves they never understood Blue rain only exists when enough tears begin to fall When the world ignores to see through it all, The tears that flow through the Blue Rain…
This is to all those precious lives that were taken from such cruel acts and words from a dark soul...

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  1. Date: 9/18/2012 10:30:00 PM

    people that need to cause so much pain, will be reimbursed again an again, till they remember nice, not insane, is live's learning still there to claim...

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 9:45:00 AM

    beautiful words indeed, Gail

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 2:12:00 PM

    I love how something so beautiful (blue rain) is used to express such darkness and pain. Well done! :) Tanya

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 9/17/2012 3:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tanya, thank you for commenting on my poem Blue Rain. Luv, Gail
  1. Date: 9/17/2012 1:43:00 PM

    Lovely way to describe tears hide them in the "blue rain" ..... all are allowed to cry sometimes. Have a nice afternoon Gail. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 9/17/2012 3:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Anne, thanks for stopping by to comment on my poem Blue Rain. Love always, Gail