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Baby Girl

Lying in the morgue aneath the dim light
Her corpse both motionless 
As left behind; pulling up unto the curb 
While decades have come and gone
Held the years when beauty fled 
A breath she flew; purged with tears 
Which held their sight 
And eager hands to turn this key....
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...."Baby Girl" *

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  1. Date: 10/11/2012 4:45:00 AM

    It so sad.

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 5:50:00 PM

    Oh woow is makes me sad, brings a memory so close too my heart. Thank you for such for your beautiful comments. Dawn xx

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 4:05:00 AM

    oh!!!so sad but beautifully written poem friend Tristen...thanks for sharing. have a good day.

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 2:08:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this one even though I feel sadness and emotion pain probably gripped the writer...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 9:39:00 PM

    How lonely, cold and tragic! But well written. Thanks for your comments on my latest.

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 7:26:00 PM

    A horror.

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 8:28:00 PM

    So Great and so touching write which had almost drew me into tears. Thank you so much for sharing my dear friend!!! have a nice and grace-filled day always!!! hugs:)

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 2:54:00 PM

    Ah! What it must have taken to write this memory...A heart speaks! Lovely versing. Cynthia

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 12:53:00 PM

    a gripping write that brings me nearly to tears... your depth is well inscribed, tristen.. just wonderful..: huggs!

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 10:07:00 AM

    Tristen, deep, but passionate .. a small eerie feeling,,, enjoyed..pd