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  1. Date: 3/28/2014 10:55:00 AM
    very heart moving... though it's sad.. :o(( penned with heart, Tristen! ..thanks also for visiting my world.. I appreciate your kind deed... hugs!! ^_^

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 4:45:00 AM
    It so sad.

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 5:50:00 PM
    Oh woow is makes me sad, brings a memory so close too my heart. Thank you for such for your beautiful comments. Dawn xx

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 4:05:00 AM
    oh!!!so sad but beautifully written poem friend Tristen...thanks for sharing. have a good day.

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 2:08:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading this one even though I feel sadness and emotion pain probably gripped the writer...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 9:39:00 PM
    How lonely, cold and tragic! But well written. Thanks for your comments on my latest.

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 7:26:00 PM
    A horror.

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 8:28:00 PM
    So Great and so touching write which had almost drew me into tears. Thank you so much for sharing my dear friend!!! have a nice and grace-filled day always!!! hugs:)

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 2:54:00 PM
    Ah! What it must have taken to write this memory...A heart speaks! Lovely versing. Cynthia

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 12:53:00 PM
    a gripping write that brings me nearly to tears... your depth is well inscribed, tristen.. just wonderful..: huggs!

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 10:07:00 AM
    Tristen, deep, but passionate .. a small eerie feeling,,, enjoyed..pd