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The Ending Part of My Life, The Beginning Part Of My Suffering

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The Ending Part of My Life, The Beginning Part Of My Suffering

 The Ending Part of My Life, The Beginning Part Of My Suffering
8/02/10
By: Sami LaRose


The tears are over powering my view
Making it impossible to see into the moonlight
So many noises all around, when I just want peace and quiet.
I look at the spot where you used to lay on my bed, and a tear drips down my face
I can no longer take this, I am breaking down.
So many hidden scars, so many hidden journeys
You were the first one to ever read my diary.
I put my trust in you, knowing I was taking a risk, but at the time I thought it was worth it.
Looking back now, I wouldn’t change a thing
It all happens for a reason
Even if I am miserable now and you are happy
I rather it be that way anyway

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  1. Date: 9/16/2012 10:14:00 PM
    Irony, spring in fall.. Love it though, nice form

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 10:13:00 PM
    I can totally relate

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    Date: 9/16/2012 10:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you can relate