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My words are potent
As fluent as the clearest language 
It carries weight so please understand what I am saying
The cities are burning while the kings on their throne
Stay still, populace do not supply your ignorance with bliss 
Knowledge is key; fire begets fire so use water there’s the well 

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  1. Date: 9/17/2012 2:45:00 PM

    Hi Guy~ i'm thirsty all o a sudden... great burning verse,.. always~ PD

    Dorelien Avatar Guy-Adler Dorelien Date: 9/17/2012 3:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol thank you very much, I am really glad that you enjoyed it. It means allot coming from you.