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Bronze, Silver and Gold

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Bronze, Silver and Gold

 
Bronze, silver and gold Caught in the sun so light The momentous reveal of every fight Wishes we are never told Caught in the sun so light Bronze faces contrite Wishes we are never told Faces much too bold Bronze faces contrite Compared to crinkled green notes Wishes we are never told Survival’s fight Compared to crinkled green notes The momentous reveal of every fight Survival’s fight Bronze, silver and gold

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  1. Date: 9/28/2012 8:22:00 AM
    Lovely work, and welcome to the site xx

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 5:36:00 AM
    A belated congratulations on your win in Rhonda and Cyndi's "Penny Pantoums" contest Phoebe. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 4:58:00 PM
    Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 12:23:00 PM
    Very nice Phoebe!Congrats on your win in the contest.

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 11:35:00 AM
    this is my 3rd time reading this peace of writing i like it alot am waiting for more please read the rest of my writing it will help you with descrptiveness and imagry manga and anime forever go furries

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 4:33:00 PM
    Amazing style! Loved it :)

    Morakinyo Avatar Phoebe Morakinyo
    Date: 9/21/2012 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm grateful ;) Thank you :)
  1. Date: 9/20/2012 1:37:00 AM
    Lovely write Phoebe! Very well developed!

    Morakinyo Avatar Phoebe Morakinyo
    Date: 9/21/2012 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you :) I'm glad :)
  1. Date: 9/19/2012 11:03:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Phoebe. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

    Morakinyo Avatar Phoebe Morakinyo
    Date: 9/19/2012 11:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aww, thank you :) I can't believe everyone here is so nice :)
  1. Date: 9/19/2012 10:53:00 AM
    wow this is really good i love your avatar bythe way manga and animae rule and are very addictive i love them you should read my writing i have one called furries all otherwritings iv'e done so far are kind of dark i will be wacthing you postings

    Morakinyo Avatar Phoebe Morakinyo
    Date: 9/19/2012 11:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks :) And thanks again :) I cropped it from a pic I found on the internet. They do! And yes they are addictive, wehen you start you just can't stop... Ooh, I'll check it out, and thanks for watching :) I'm hoping I win the contest because I'm trying to publish a book and I need references (plus I like the idea of poem competitions)
  1. Date: 9/19/2012 6:04:00 AM
    Very nicely done Phoebe and great use of the form, very thoughtful and well laid out. Well done.

    Morakinyo Avatar Phoebe Morakinyo
    Date: 9/19/2012 10:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much :) I'm glad it turned out so well :)
  1. Date: 9/17/2012 10:02:00 AM
    Well done, To me this would be a difficult poetic form. But, you pulled it off so well. I especially enjoyed the line "Wishes we are never told" The wishes others make

    Morakinyo Avatar Phoebe Morakinyo
    Date: 9/18/2012 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, it was really difficult, but I don't really deserve all the credit since I was following a pantuom layout from the internet (I didn't know a pantuom existed till a few days ago) it's nice to know I did ok :)
  1. Date: 9/16/2012 12:47:00 PM
    Very nicely constructed! Terry

    Morakinyo Avatar Phoebe Morakinyo
    Date: 9/16/2012 1:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you :)