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She'll be Back

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She'll be Back

She walks out the door
no gesture of any kind...
pink salmon for tea.

© Harry J Horsman 2012  

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  1. Date: 9/19/2012 10:07:00 AM

    Simple but real. Life goes on. Thank you for the review of my poem. There is more to come. Linda

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 7:25:00 PM

    Reminds me a bit of "Ruby, Don't Take Your Love to Town" by Kenny Rogers and the First Edition. Another good write.

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 3:45:00 PM

    Harry, how long will the tea sit there, before she is back?? a very interesting haiku, when you think of smelly coffee... enjoyed....pd

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 11:05:00 AM

    Interesting haiku. Last line carries the sweet. Here net is not well today. So, am is not able to read all. Left to read tomorrow.Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 7:54:00 AM

    Interesting work..Enjoyed reading ..Sara

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 5:20:00 PM

    Ha...Pink Salmon...I love it, but for tea? She should have taught you how to make eggs before she goes. Big hugs (^.^) Joy Wells

    Wellington Avatar Joy Wellington Date: 9/17/2012 5:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks always Harry for visiting and commenting.
  1. Date: 9/17/2012 10:53:00 AM

    Splendid haiku,Harry! Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 6:27:00 AM

    Oh gosh my nana always had tinned salmon for tea on Sunday. like it xx

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 2:40:00 PM

    Very well done Harry !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 12:07:00 PM

    Ahhhhhhh. This is haiku!!!

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 11:45:00 AM

    Beautiful, simply beautiful write my friend! You seemed to have mastered the art of the Haiku, a very difficult art to do so! Very nicely done, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 11:36:00 AM

    Good one Harry!Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 11:13:00 AM

    this 'ku is a truly engaging one with a blast of an ending,harry... lovely impressions!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 10:07:00 AM

    Very nice Haiku... they are so hard to do well... Hope you eat all the salmon before she gets back... Terry

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 9:44:00 AM

    Harry, thanks for the encouraging words to my son! I love this haiku also I think it is almost a perfect tradtional haiku....