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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 5:35:00 PM
    Sweet little pair here. Lots of good imagery. Peaceful feeling. That makes for a good poem.

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:26:00 AM
    Did you get the poem on Seb I e-mailed to you yesterday, Gwen?!!! Jag

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 8:15:00 PM
    soup mail

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 12:18:00 PM
    Acute sight captured nicely. Thanks for reading my write and for comment. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 2:10:00 PM
    Ahh!! This one is so expressive and unique..Thanks for stopping by my blog..I sent Jack a list of the names of the people who commented..Sara

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 5:48:00 PM
    Ah! Lovely!...I see it... Cynthia

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 1:35:00 AM
    Gooood one liked it......

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 1:57:00 AM
    Loving this one again. soupmail.

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 7:39:00 AM
    Lovely Haiku Gwen with some superb imagery painted here. Loved your comment on my clerihew.

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 2:42:00 AM
    Very nice! Love the image of the lady bug trying to fit in - it's touching.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 7:49:00 AM
    Sweet Gwendolyn.

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 6:53:00 PM
    I love this haiku, especially the ruby taking flight. Unusually images work best. How did your ride go?

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 6:45:00 AM
    nicely done.hmmm i enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 2:29:00 PM
    awww, what beautiful haiku, Gwendolen - truly lovely

    lwele Avatar chipepo lwele
    Date: 9/26/2012 6:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    beautiful
  1. Date: 9/23/2012 8:17:00 PM
    One of the best haiku's I have ever read. You have so much talent. Love your choice of wording and the images you've inspired...wow!

    lwele Avatar chipepo lwele
    Date: 9/26/2012 6:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    fabulous
  1. Date: 9/22/2012 9:38:00 PM
    WOWIE, I love these, Gwen. soupmail for ya.

    lwele Avatar chipepo lwele
    Date: 9/26/2012 6:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    marvellous.
  1. Date: 9/20/2012 8:32:00 AM
    Oooh, a red butterfly. We don't see many of them here. This is a lovely haiku, Gwen. I'm sending you a Soup mail. Love, Carolyn

    lwele Avatar chipepo lwele
    Date: 9/26/2012 6:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    best commentary.
  1. Date: 9/16/2012 3:24:00 PM
    Okies now [no one kill me Gwen asked me to review her haiku] first haiku..lines 1 & 2 are very nice..line three is a judgement/ a subjective statement [ie it's all in your mind, your opinion and you are personifying not done in traditional haiku] if you really saw this..what else was happening? did you hear anything? ahhhhhh you did SMELL somethings so line 3 can bring in scent! verse 2 all personification all subjective..free verse..Light & Love

    lwele Avatar chipepo lwele
    Date: 9/26/2012 6:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    i love it.
  1. Date: 9/16/2012 11:38:00 AM
    gwenie...some definite goosebumping here with gentle images for a one-of-a-kind 'ku!... so, that's always a good sign, kabayan!...:) huggs

    lwele Avatar chipepo lwele
    Date: 9/26/2012 6:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    marvelous
  1. Date: 9/16/2012 11:35:00 AM
    Very good haiku!!

    lwele Avatar chipepo lwele
    Date: 9/26/2012 6:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    grandeur
    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 9/16/2012 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :P
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