The Spirit of a Mannequin by yasmin khan

Gwendolen R.

Date: 9/27/2012 1:19:00 PM

Thanks for sharing a Kit Kat with me...u are the essence of success in so many ways! And as a friend, YOU R NUMERO UNO!!

nette onclaud

Date: 9/27/2012 12:16:00 PM

my mareeey, a winner for me deep down... was looking for the flavor part... ever lovely!..priya huggs to you!..thank you!..:)

Yesha Shah

Date: 9/17/2012 5:29:00 AM

Excellent Yas. You did the contest with a most wonderful approach! sure to do well this one.

Owen Yeates

Date: 9/17/2012 2:03:00 AM

Hi Yasmin very good write, good luck in the contest, all the best Owen

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/16/2012 11:43:00 PM

composure is often the ingredient for maintaining those dominant traits that lead us to dignified survival, however, some of my best success have benn resultant from spontaneity which can conflict with composure in terms of impetuosity, soe of my grandest failures have ensued from spontaneity too - J.A.B. %

Gwendolen R.

Date: 9/16/2012 4:55:00 PM

Oh la la la la! Sexy write, Yas...sequins are a great fabrique of success...

Gwendolen R. Date: 9/16/2012 4:57:00 PM

don't pinch me, ....now what is the flavor?....

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 9/16/2012 3:32:00 PM

This evokes a completely different visual than the mannequin poem I read earlier today. This is of stoic grace as a model glides along the runway.

nette onclaud

Date: 9/16/2012 11:41:00 AM

may your sunday bring you joy, mareeey!... any plans of going back to saudi?... russell is right :) huggs!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/16/2012 11:05:00 AM

I love this write immensely my friend! This one shows life, reality of it anyways! You may want to look into Nette's contest rules however...I believe it does say you need a fabric and a fragrance as part of the poem! Just a heads up, I want you to place high in her contest! Not to say that this poem isn't awesome because it is truly awesome Yasmin! This write is grandiose, so beautiful! Fabulous piece my friend, Great Work!!

yasmin khan Date: 9/16/2012 1:17:00 PM

Thank you so much Russell, I tried to rectify my errors..awefully grateful to you for showing me where I went wrong..

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 9/16/2012 9:41:00 AM

Very clever poem. Perhaps the eyes undressing her Will don her with a fur

Gwendolen R.

Date: 9/16/2012 9:21:00 AM

U make me blush, Yas....hahah....somedays we are all like this lil ladybug! U nudge me often just like the sun!!

Gwendolen R. Date: 9/16/2012 9:22:00 AM

oh goodness,..is Jagath right?...I guess Nette really wants a fabrique and flavor...I will post one here in a minute...hope it can help! ps...it's not a very good one tho...

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 9/16/2012 8:58:00 AM

Nice, with or without the fabric and flavour! Jag

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/16/2012 8:51:00 AM

It will only be you Yas, love the theme you chose.. Wishing you the best with this unique entry.. love Wilma

Wilma Neels Date: 9/16/2012 9:19:00 AM

glad you like the title, a close friend of mine suggested it, told him I love it.. Have to tell him that you liked the title ;)

Terry O'Leary

Date: 9/16/2012 7:39:00 AM

Very, very nice! Good luck in the contest... Terry

Gwendolen R.

Date: 9/16/2012 7:10:00 AM

Good morning, Yasminovah! Haven't heard of this form for Nette's contest, but I love the simple short verse form and the twist at the end...loved how u gave her personality (as tho the manequinn had anything to do with it! lol.) Enjoyed reading my friend's newest creation!! gwendolen

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