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A gray, sunless day

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A gray, sunless day

A gray sunless day.
Heavy rain flagellating 
my bare-necked crying soul.

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  1. Date: 12/5/2012 9:32:00 AM

    Lines one and three very good. Line two spoilt by the word flagellating

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 12:38:00 AM

    WOW! What depth of emotion. Very well worded!

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 2:34:00 PM

    very powerful! I like this one very much. thanks for your nice comments. warm thoughts, Ralph