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Our Humanities with Consequence this Transparency in Godliness

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Our Humanities with Consequence this Transparency in Godliness

The Godliness of Adoption is...
Or is it not?
 …A beautiful spring sprig floret of rose. A rose brought home from our humanity's colorful garden of trust? Yet, was it not all that long ago when the cut of each stem entrusted to its own gardener's worthy and caring hands? 
Hands, now too soon stripped and emptied.
Hands that were easily led astray by the coersions of now self-appointed zealots.
They, with hands marked with ever stained bloody thorn pricked fingers, which now present each torn stem of rose on heaven-like sent pedestals; until met is a king's ransom; these thirty pieces of silver, the ask of many an angelic broker.

Adoption is...
Or is it not? 
...An act next to Godliness when these angels of guise are loosed to search in the mist of this motherland?
They, the finders of our pink and blue hued overflow spillage of souls.
This is nature of guised humanity. Delicately does it assist society in the dredge of waiting collection ponds, pools of tears that gleamingly mirror you and I; and from where our memory should fill with sounds. The siren-like cries of which, now link with our distantly lost...  ...or coldly disengage of our not of want…

Adoption is... 
Or is it not?
...The beautiful water lilys of pond? Those that so serenely float above a never skimming conscience that is this God-fearing nation; a polarized complacency so sweetly lost amidst its own mesmerizing shimmer, and without inkling of shame, all innocence of eyes fail to see through transparency by such weakly given puruse. A view that cannot pierce the murkily veiled mire that hides just below its own watery reflection... 
...And where underneath trails this triad’s tangled web that will soon unravel in route to tie with each long waited conscience…

Adoption is it or is it not our "Humanities with Consequence"?

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  1. Date: 4/7/2013 5:55:00 AM
    BEAUTIFUL AND TOUCHING BLESSINGS FROM ROSE XXX

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 4:32:00 PM
    Chidren of the World Adoption Agency [COW] of Verona, New Jersey, which is now defucnt due to the illegal adoption of my newborn son, is, has been and will always be responsible for this pain of my heart. My son was adopted upon birth on October 20, 2001; I think his name is Joseph. Veronica Serio, a liar and once the executive director of COW [who also now teaches our kids at Brookdale College in Jersey], also worked with adoption attorney Steven I. Sklar, [who also lied to the New jersey State Supreme Court], helped Seton Hall University's James Boskey write New Jersey Adoption Law. All this information is true and should help my son find me... Open Public Records Act, New Jersey

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 2:26:00 AM
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  1. Date: 9/16/2012 12:56:00 AM
    .Adoption to them who cannot bear is not to to those who cannot care. It is to those who care but cannot bear. To those who God would care would care. Those who have not where the inheritence of God share.

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    Date: 9/16/2012 8:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank u, thats the beauty of poetry. sometimes one must choose a path of meaning...