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IN A SPACE

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IN A SPACE

In a space of want

in a time of need

surrounded with a pressure

like a gas leaked gragually

slow unseen unheard

waiting to ignite

from a little spark

explodes colors bright

in a little metaphor

i place between the words

if you read deep enough

a story will be heard.

 

Dawn Mclaughlin.    @Dawn2012.

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  1. Date: 9/28/2012 9:30:00 AM
    I like to use metaphors myself love your poem x davidscott

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 5:15:00 PM
    A true poets words. Love it Dawn!! Hugs Michael

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 4:51:00 PM
    *.* I Would Rather Listen Closely Unto Your Beauty's Priceless Beating Heart, My Dear Sweet Precious & Beautiful Dawn ˜ Love, Tristen *.*