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  1. Date: 9/22/2012 6:09:00 PM
    Beautiful x So romantic :) thank you for your lovely visit xx Dawn

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 8:03:00 PM
    Hi Tristan, I'm so far behind I think I'm first buthere I am reading this lovely piece of poetry. Wasn't Marilyn Monroe's name Norma Jean? Wonder if these lines speak to her. So nicely done! :)

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 7:07:00 PM
    very sweet romantic poem... loved it very much.... thanks for sharing....Love Mohini...

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 10:54:00 AM
    so sweet poem my friend Tristen!! I like it (^_^) thanks for sharing and for dropping by. Have a blessed day always! hugsss **Maria**

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 9:24:00 PM
    very very romantic! i'm speechless, lol. Thank you for sharing with us your Notes of Love poem my dear friend, Tristen! Have a wonderful day always!!!! hugs:)

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 3:56:00 PM
    Very sweet poem couldn't help but to smile

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 9:48:00 PM
    a romantic escapade of deep love and feeling tristen ..a stunning imagine in words to compliment your photo in glass crystal sphere luv .. beautiful essence ..

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 8:24:00 PM
    Love does crazy things to te heart. an entertaining write. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 5:20:00 PM
    I really enjoyed this tremendously delightful page of poetry my friend! What a glorious and fabulous poem that you have written! This is an astonishing write, a peaceful purchase of time for ones feel of reality! This is a grandiose piece, fantastic poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 1:47:00 PM
    Oh Tristen, your heart seems to be accelerating the your poem..xoxo~pd

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 1:45:00 PM
    A cute and funny poems Tristen, like it. Wishing you a wonderful weekend, with sunshine and song. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 1:34:00 PM
    I like this Tristen, it makes me want to pursue it with words, It's Melina she says she needs help with her math, won't you be a dear and help her out, I grab my back pack his mother on the cheek and ride my bike whistling in the wind, crooning her song, "My Eyes Adored You" Ah! to be young again, thanks Tristen xxxx

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    Date: 9/14/2012 1:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I meant kiss mother on the cheek, oops! And after they did their homework, they went to the malt shop for a soda put a nickel in the juke box and danced to "My Eyes Adored You" and they lived happily ever after. xxx