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INCOMPATIBLE WORLDS

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INCOMPATIBLE WORLDS

I’m between reality & determination
I have no choice but to succeed.
Wondering mind, fail me not.
     Is it possible,
Am I becoming too ambitious?
With the wanting in my hands
But the desires in my eyes are pulling 
Me & my soul from my heart.

I’m between blessings & hopes
To believe, I am afraid.
Convincing words, deceit me not.
      Could it be,
Have I worked up to my fullest potential?
  While my feet walk
But my legs are glued to the ground
Pushing my closer to the cliff away
From my soul & my heart.


JazzieAnn Brown  2012

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  1. Date: 9/19/2012 1:32:00 PM
    Jasmine, great poem! Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 1:07:00 AM
    LOVEly write Jasmine! Very well written! Love your use of rhetorical questions to show the internal conflict. Nice!