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Revelations of a rickety soul transcribed by a shrewd Sage

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Revelations of a rickety soul transcribed by a shrewd Sage

I think about my heart & then I ruminate about you.
I hate how entirety just fell apart.

Now as you glide past I apprehend it’s my feelings
I cannot undo.

I gaze & identify the fact I can’t stand you.

But I heed & distinguish that by the way you chat I still 
adulate you.

I imagine you 
& notice that it’s you I still want.

~Confessions of a unsteady heart written by a smart thinker. ~



*a variety of lines from other poems I’ve previously written that I collided on one page to express a brief emotion I have experienced at one point in stage.*


JazzieAnn Brown   9/11/12

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  1. Date: 9/18/2012 1:45:00 PM
    Interesting writing. Just one suggestion: In all forms of writing, always spell out "and" and never replace it with "&".