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If These Walls Could Talk

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If These Walls Could Talk


If the walls around us could talk they would have spilled all the beans what you had done to her last summer and along with that your many a sin. If the walls around us could talk we'd have to arrange an open space I bet to discuss the minutes of closed door meetings and to keep those things a top secret. If the walls around us could talk so many mysteries would have been solved how that man was killed in his apartment and who were the culprits involved. If the walls around us could talk perhaps we would have a different history we might have avoided so many deaths our progress would have been a different story. If the walls around me could talk they would have told me to stop writing and make some changes in this poem before its final posting:) =================000================ Date:13th September 2012

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  1. Date: 1/30/2013 10:09:00 AM

    Very well done Kash,,,, if this internet could talk, it would explode ;} have a blessed day ;}

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 10:10:00 AM

    If only it happened, i would choose house of woods. A really great writing, Kash :)

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 8:44:00 AM

    Simply, truly beautiful!

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 6:32:00 AM

    The shadow knows inside these walls. The darkened light nature befalls. Outside in air so fresh and sweet. I hope some day we all can meet.

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 10:21:00 PM

    :) now way!! No changes! This is so good! Loved it! Glad I found it. A job well done, Kash, and easy for us all to relate. Oh, yes, if the walls could talk .... hmm :) Thought provoking. Caroline.

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 10:45:00 AM

    you're alive , kashi!... give me more poetry!.:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 8:36:00 PM

    Wow! A real awesome write my friend, Kash. I wish you all the best and luck in the contest! Thank you so much for stopping by and your inspiring comments. hugs:)

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 3:08:00 PM

    love this thought provoking write, Kash - and had a chuckle with the last stanza : )

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 9:04:00 AM

    wow!! an awesome poem Kash..I like it. Good luck in the contest. :) and thanks for dropping by.

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 8:12:00 PM

    So serious and then makes you smile at the end....great poem! Hugs

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 7:08:00 PM

    Hi, again, Kash!!!

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 4:44:00 PM

    If for a contest, reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by with congrats.I would think that some walls in some areas of the US would have some tales to be told...Sara

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 3:23:00 PM

    Hey...don't change anything Kash. This poem is perfect. I like the way how you touched on different scenarios. A sure winner! One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 1:44:00 PM

    a fascinating musing with images so memorable...well done, kashi.. a winner for sure!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 12:31:00 PM

    Kash, this is one clever gem and your wit added makes it perfect! Hope your weekend will be an awesome one ;)

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 8:44:00 AM

    a phenomenal poem Kash expressed with mystery and suspense .. luv the storyline my friend .. wishing u a sweet success ..

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 10:36:00 PM

    hahahaha, such serious stuff and suddenly that last stanza appears out of nowhere. This is really clever and funny, Kashinath. ME LIKES!!!! I hope it does well in the contest for ya. I'm OUT Of here. My shoulder was ok before I started with internet tonight. Friday is coming. YAYYYYYY

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 9:48:00 PM

    always nice reading your work,,, dear poet Kash....pd

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 3:45:00 PM

    Ha, ha, I love that last stanza my friend, very clever! This is a very meaningful poem, a write of inspiration and intrigue! I love your expressions you used for this incredible poem, awesome write Kashi! Wonderful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 12:57:00 PM

    Yes, if the walls could talk, many of us would not pursue our present activity. That is human nature. I guess that is what my mother meant when she said: "What would the people say". I never did figure out who the "people" were that I had to take into consideration. If the walls could talk, JFK's demise would not be an international mystery, for example. Love this poem - it led me to think on many things, Kash. Love, Suzette