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I The Wall
Secrets one may hide within me, those of your life... I will never tell.
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Sandy Ivy D
Date: 10/5/2012 4:49:00 PM
love this poem sandy
Linda Barr
Date: 9/24/2012 5:18:00 PM
Mystery is the strength of love. Thanks for the review.
Jay Loveless
Date: 9/16/2012 8:15:00 AM
Stories written on your skin, Drawn and etched into your hide, Told and cried throughout the night.
Yesha Shah
Date: 9/16/2012 5:27:00 AM
So much said with such few words. an insightful write on the theme of the contest. Very well penned and thank you for stopping by.
Robert A. Dufresne
Date: 9/16/2012 3:07:00 AM
Takes two to have this solidarity of trust. A stalwart message to a friend. Succinct, Harry.
Jack Ellison
Date: 9/15/2012 3:58:00 PM
What a delightfully profound and clever poem my friend! Kudos, Jack
jack horne
Date: 9/15/2012 2:52:00 PM
love this clever write, Harry
Leonora Galinta
Date: 9/15/2012 1:44:00 AM
so profound but you've vividly picture the wall in your few words, harry!!! brilliant! ilove it! thanks for stopping by reading my work and especially for shopping in my poetry dept. store! so, that given freely away to you needs a replacement,LOL. just kidding! Thank you so much. Good luck and best wishes for your big win my dear friend :) hugs
Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2012 3:04:00 PM
You have a whole wall to write on ...... Few words can say so much. Have a lovely Friday afternoon. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Wilma Neels
Date: 9/14/2012 12:27:00 PM
Trust you Harry to say so much with so little words.. Love this, hope your weekend will be a great one ;) love Wilma
apoorva patrikar
Date: 9/14/2012 12:10:00 PM
self explanatory! wonderful!
Anthony Nutter
Date: 9/14/2012 6:47:00 AM
So few words, but so very accurate. So many secrets hidden within the walls. Glad mine can't speak. Another excellent piece Harry
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/14/2012 5:41:00 AM
soupy x
kash poet
Date: 9/14/2012 1:46:00 AM
Very good personification in this short verse Harry.Enjoyed the read.
Robert Pettit
Date: 9/13/2012 10:59:00 PM
Walls don't have a mouth. They will never tell your secrets. Good write Harry.
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/13/2012 10:18:00 PM
So much said in so few words. I had wanted to do one with this message too, Harry, and here you are saying it so perfectly with this senryu.
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 9/13/2012 3:10:00 PM
tremendous way to exude theme harry luv .. much said in few words so special .. good luck dear friend .
robert johnson
Date: 9/13/2012 3:09:00 PM
I Robot, I pod, I pad, now I the wall. :) I like it. Four walls are all that's keeping the ceiling from becoming the floor. If not, we would get trampled.
bl devnath
Date: 9/13/2012 12:23:00 PM
Hi! my sweet friend, you are not the wall but the faithful man of sweet secrets. Excellent personification. Loved always, bl
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/13/2012 10:11:00 AM
ooh like it, just think of all those secrets behind all those walls, gosh the mind boggles xx
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/13/2012 10:11:00 AM
like the new look...
nette onclaud
Date: 9/13/2012 10:06:00 AM
such mystery you provide me with, harry!.. this is intrinsically wired!.. winning wishes and huggs!..:)
Russell Sivey
Date: 9/13/2012 10:00:00 AM
Beautiful, simply beautiful write Harry! There are some interesting secrets that the walls in my house holds I'm sure! And these walls sure aren't talking to tell them either, ha ha! Great Work!!
yasmin khan
Date: 9/13/2012 8:53:00 AM
pink floyd will not agree but I love this very eloquent write.....
Doris Culverhouse
Date: 9/13/2012 7:36:00 AM
so intriguing.....?Nicely played!