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On the love rock---

Waiting for you here on the love rock Plucking out petals, loves me, loves me not Life's for once, lets hold hands and walk A scarlet blush, for you, my face has got Plucking out petals, loves me, loves me not Lush green grass and swaying Zinnia flowers A scarlet blush, for you, my face has got A fluff of clouds hovering with spring showers Lush green grass and swaying Zinnia flowers Soft breeze teasing, ruffling my pink chiffon dress A fluff of clouds hovering with spring showers Butterfly and blossom's romantic caress Soft breeze teasing, ruffling my pink chiffon dress Feel of fingers through my hair, your gentle touch Butterfly and blossom's romantic caress With bated breath I wait, my heart's love is such Feel of fingers through my hair, your gentle touch Life's for once, lets hold hands and walk With bated breath I wait, my heart's love is such Waiting for you here on the love rock

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  1. Date: 12/16/2012 8:02:00 AM

    sui javo Yeshoo..

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 8:09:00 PM

    Bujechchen ???

    khan Avatar yasmin khan Date: 12/16/2012 8:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    what does that mean dada?
  1. Date: 12/15/2012 8:08:00 PM

    Very good romantic Pantoum.Loved it on my first read Yesha.Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 10:31:00 AM

    good to see this one again. It's so pretty. I just love how you called it the Love rock. congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 4:57:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot once more Yesha love xx

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 10:45:00 PM

    wowo Yeshooo, sooooo roamntic ..congrads on your fantastic win..

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 9:37:00 PM

    Adorable. Many congrats for this win.

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:53:00 PM

    Yesha, congratulations in the Skat, contest. Take Care PD

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 7:25:00 PM

    Congratulations ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 11:19:00 AM

    Returning to this excellent pantoum you wrote. Was this contest judged? I see no congrats for you but I really like this one. or maybe you just wrote a pantoum and it was not for any contest. It's sure a nice one for me to return to.

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 9:59:00 AM

    very well written

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 8:40:00 PM

    Such a romantic Pantoum!Love it!Is this for a contest?

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 10:29:00 AM

    i love this too Yesha, love how you weave this so well within the form (pantoum) awesome poem...

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 3:42:00 AM

    Yesha, a wonderful poem - love it. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 9:30:00 PM

    wow, yesha, what a marvelous pantoum. It's got great imagery. it makes me really love pantoum poetry to see this.

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 9:06:00 PM

    A beautiful pantoum, Yesha, with a wonderful flow! I love the passionate feel of this piece...well done! Hugs, Rhonda