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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 12:31:00 PM

    Hi, Mikki. Did you get my Pea green Boat poem? Thinking of you. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 1:18:00 PM

    Very very very entertained!

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:02:00 AM

    Ah, yes, this golden oldie. I believe I mentioned we have a new cat in the house - a black kitten with a snowflake splotch on her chest and a dab of white on one paw. She likes both nip and fish, but, following your advice I never serve both together. Bev has named her (what else) Snowflake. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 9:06:00 PM

    Just got your comment on spectacles Mikkie take care love always Joe..

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:02:00 AM

    Is this the "Fiddler on the Roof"? I like this fantasy - reminds me of Tolkien's poem about the "The Man in the Moon came down too soon" Peace and Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 12:51:00 PM

    Well this is certainly different than I have in my memories... and far better... nice imagery... Terry (& thanks you for all your kind comments...)

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 5:22:00 PM

    Hi Mikki, I just read a part youdidwith Joe and thinkyou should have posted it here. I loved it - how are you doing, hopeall is well with you. Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 9:01:00 PM

    Now you better get to writing some more poetry, hey..it's cold and snowy..stay still and write! XXXX [how about the adventures of kiwi?] Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 10:10:00 AM

    Mikki, this is just riveting, an excelleny example of twisting an old story, I love it...David

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 11:30:00 PM

    Michelle, i love this poem. wow..i love what you did up there... anew mother goose way...xxo~pd

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 8:38:00 AM

    I like this poem! Have you ever read Tolkien's poem about a cat? "The fat cat on the mat..." Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 4:40:00 PM

    Doggies, Mikki! I knew y'all'd like this fiddlin' poem. When I got to the chain saw part I knew I'd have to soften the piece a bit. We saw a movie called Dredd. - blood and gore from beginning to the end. My advice. If you don't like blood dripping from the theater seat, don't see Dredd. Love, daver

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 1:05:00 PM

    In honor of your Fiddler's cat, I am now writing a Halloween poem about a graveyard fiddler. Something is buried in the cornfield - Moo, ha,ha,ha! Love, daver

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 8:58:00 AM

    Nothing wrong to come back and read something so special again. A great story Michele with such amazing descriptions that make this one stand out!! Love Lizzie

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 11:25:00 AM

    Hey this is one cool cat scene you got going Mikkie.." It almost gets me wanting to play the violin..! ( just keep the 'lil guy close ) Is my advice; not many play to love & trust..! ( he could pull a hit out of the bag one day!)

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 6:01:00 PM

    An original version of the old nusery rhyme. I like this a lot, very clever.

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 3:40:00 PM

    story flows and the wording goes, like halliwells cat flap, no ins n outs with the snakes about, an the puddys say whys that!

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 12:44:00 PM

    EEEE, Hah! I wonder - would that there kitty play at our county fair. We could spoon and dish up something at the pie contest table. Yers trooly, Clem Tassle.

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 1:56:00 PM

    Like this magnanimous Cat I like the rewards that ensue from fatigue, namely satisfaction of enduring thresholds met with enthussiasm - though I prefer Malbec wine - this piece gives me hope in the night release my friend - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 1:02:00 AM

    I love it when I read poems like this,,,,, thank you for reading my " hammer in hand" ;} have a blessed day Michelle ;}

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 7:37:00 AM

    Mikki, this is just awesome.. Really enjoyed it this afternoon, you sure captured my attention with it.. You are a genius ;) enjoy the weekend further, tc Wilma

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 7:48:00 AM

    Ah, a brand new one from your ingenious pen and what a treasure it is. I picture Puss in Boots doing the honors and the violin sobbing and soaring with sound to change the world. What a piece of magic this is Michelle, your imagination takes me to magic places! Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 2:57:00 PM

    wonderful and very clever written , the words flow like magic, as one is almost under the spell of the whole poem.......

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 5:11:00 PM

    For sure, this kitty had a bite too much of nip, a swallow too much of Bordeaux. What a wild concerto he played. This old dog laughed and sat in amazement, loving every note. Poem - Allegro con brio. You be something else, Mikki. Love, daver

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 9:49:00 PM

    oh my gosh, this is genius, Michelle. To take that old nursery rhyme and turn it into such a unique and imaginative tale. Superb ending on this one. a new FAVE for me. Glad to see you posted a new one at last and that was so special!

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 11:54:00 AM

    I like this .... you are good at rhymes and stories. Have a lovely day. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 11:10:00 AM

    OMG so good! What a mind you have tell more kitty stories..actuall tell tales of Kiwi! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 10:51:00 AM

    Beautiful/perfect rhyme/flow/imagery... Terry

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 10:44:00 AM

    This is a fabulous write! I really enjoyed reading this poem this afternoon! I liked the cleverness of using a cat for the fiddler's pet, in the moonlight too! Wonderful piece, Great Work!!