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  1. Date: 6/8/2013 12:23:00 PM

    Yasmin, Congratulations!!! , nice to see you on Nates' winning list. By the looks of his winners, it seems as if he's a real picky person.... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 8:34:00 PM

    thank you

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 8:15:00 PM

    Yasmin,i'm all around fun, here at home...i love hanging out and making smiles ,, just cause i love smiling... I'm not off to bed, but, i will put your goodnight to use in 5 hours... lol... hugs... and love... and bugs if you like butterflies... xox~pd

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 12:19:00 PM

    Oh wow! This is pure poetry my dear friend:) It doesn`t get much better than this!Pain wont let us go gently,that`s for darn sure..you wowed me with this one Yas.Have a peaceful and quiet weekend,and take care always:-) Arild

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 1:59:00 PM

    I think these verbal cleansings help deal with the stuff that we need to get rid of. Sounds like you are making headway. Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 9:10:00 AM

    This is quite an intense piece Yas.. You held my mind captive throughout.. I missed you too ;-) it is good to catch you online

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 11:42:00 PM

    Sounds like a well fought for victory my friend - Pain is a great and terrible teacher, but as with all mentors triumph arrives sweetly when we surpass the ability of the lesson - I really admire your sagacity in theme and style, and the format is interesting too - a very smart & soulful composition Yasmin - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 8:57:00 AM

    a horrific experience of suffering and pain yasmin ..the last few lines denote the release of earthly pain into peace of the spirit .. a beautiful journey luv ..

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 7:43:00 AM

    hey Yas, just dropping in to say hello...howz u been?

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 9:05:00 AM

    you tear me apart with your gripping voice, mareey... a poetic breakthrough for you!... on to the winners' list!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 5:42:00 AM

    wow, yasmin this is so intense, i've been there, i'm reliving every word you write,,,,,,,,,,, excellent poem, i agree with deb, your written word as a kind of english origin effect!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 8:52:00 PM

    wow, this is INTENSE. I am taking a guess at this. Is it for the metaphorically speaking contest? GREAT job, and I have to tell you I did a double take on the 11/09/2012 date. In America, that means november 9. I was thinking, why did she date this two months ahead? haha. Then it dawned on me, you are across the ocean. So tired tonight, Yasmin, but always happy to see you post a new poem.

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 4:21:00 PM

    Brilliant you! This piece is worth nominated for contest. I really loved it. Love, Khalid

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 6:44:00 AM

    This twists my heart for those that suffer xx

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 9:21:00 PM

    Wow, this is so descriptive, Yasmin! I feel the pain and pleading of those who suffered. A fantastic write!! Hugs, Rhonda

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 7:08:00 PM

    very powerful, I can feel the pain and the yearning for sleep, warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 11:17:00 AM

    Yikes..very real..I hope you are imagining no making me fret! You know you write as if English was your first language, amazing..many now a days die full of drugs and supposedly painless, but it doing so they miss the faces of their loved ones lost in a drugged stupor..who knows what is best [sigh] Light & Love Yassie

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 10:11:00 AM

    a very expressive and touching poem on death. I the color and emotion of a great poem. All the line were good but I especially loved the fifth line of the poem. Excellent work.

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 6:40:00 AM

    Wow, this might be one of the strongest poems I've ever read my friend! It is truly significant to the subject and is quite expressive too! You have displayed power within your words that are deep within this incredibly wondrous poem! What a wonderful piece Yasmin, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 4:54:00 AM

    Yasmin, you are writing from the depths of the soul - the pain and sorrow that "eat" you from the inside. - Very proficient written. - Have a great Tuesday. love oxox Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 4:52:00 AM

    That was very deep and intense Yas. Powerful write with strong emotions dear. Very well done.

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 3:02:00 AM

    Wow this is a dark one from you my little ray of sunshine, i hope this is not for real I couldn't bear it for you if it were. xx