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Autumn's Glory

Garden painted leaves
Autumn's glory multi hue
Squirrels race leaves laugh

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  1. Date: 9/12/2012 8:03:00 AM

    wonderful imagery in this one, Joy! You've brought it to life before my mind's eye. hugs, catie :)

    Wellington Avatar Joy Wellington Date: 9/12/2012 10:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tnx Cat!
  1. Date: 9/11/2012 12:53:00 PM

    Got the picture, joy.

    Wellington Avatar Joy Wellington Date: 9/11/2012 11:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Sher!
  1. Date: 9/11/2012 11:22:00 AM

    You have 3 parts here, you need to connect 2 of the lines gramatically & conceptually/ also there are 2 things which tell the season only 1 is needed ex: [the forest/ is full of colored leaves -- a squirrel chatters]Light & Love

    Wellington Avatar Joy Wellington Date: 9/11/2012 11:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Teach...still learning. I will make an attempt to do another one with your instructions in mind. One love.