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A Wedding Day Poem

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A Wedding Day Poem

When Fate decides to bring you love, Grab hold! You’re on the threshold of A splendid life made just for two - A life for soul mates just like you. Your being here with vows to say Will get you started on your way. But even if joy fills your heart, From now on, you must do your part. . . For things of value are not free. You must be working constantly At doing all the things you know Are vital for your love to grow. Your wedded bliss is up to you. There’s more to it than just “I do.” Grab hold! You’re on the threshold of A splendid life. Fate’s brought you love! For the Contest of Janette Fisher: When Fate Decides

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  1. Date: 9/5/2013 4:08:00 PM

    Wow, what an incredible poem. Wonderful message, wonderful rhyme, wonderful meter. This is a truly amazing poem.

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 10:27:00 AM

    Soupmail.....

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 3:20:00 PM

    *.* I Knew Not Long After I Had First Read Your Beautifully Gifted Poetry, My Dear Sweet Beautiful & Amazing Andrea ˜ That Your Beauty Was Extremely Rare & Quite Beautiful ˜ I Could Venture As Into A Long Exploi'te & Yet, I Shall Simply Say, 'You,' Are These The Most Sparkling Diamonds In Both Love & Verse To Be Dreamnt; A Threshold Of Beauty ˜ Love The Light Inside Your Loving Words ˜ My Love, Tristen *.*

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 7:54:00 PM

    Congrats on your win and so true, Love Debra

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 9:14:00 AM

    Lovely! Just all that has to be said to young lovers about all that comes along with feelings: everyday life's traps to be escaped ... My son is getting married soon and I 'm a bit worried...:) Love, Hanitra ...BTW, I don't find your clerihews up to now. I keep on trying to.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 9:19:00 AM

    Congratuaions andy this is really nic xx

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 6:23:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Janette's "When Fate Decides" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 7:33:00 PM

    Good work! You always do a great sonnet! Congrad's on your win Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 1:46:00 PM

    Love that attitude - grab hold. With two hands. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 1:55:00 PM

    Love your poem and I am sure Janette will as her daughter became engaged. Yes there is more to life than I do. Wonderful write love phyl

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 2:30:00 PM

    love this sweet write, my friend - and such truth here

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 8:08:00 PM

    Excellent write and advice Andrea....thanks for such a sweet comment on mine, we should have wrote this one together : ) Hugs

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 12:54:00 PM

    You've made Janette's decision making a bit tougher with this fine entry.

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 11:32:00 PM

    very nice to read before I go to sleep,,,,, thank you for reading "my son" poem ;} sweet dreams ;}

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 10:28:00 PM

    nice reading this one again..pd

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 8:43:00 PM

    Another great poem here!Yes Marriage is decided by fate..excellent way to do the contest.

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 3:10:00 PM

    Good far-reaching advice for the newlyweds. Been married 62 years - it only took me 35 to discover what you've written about here. Love, daver

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 4:32:00 AM

    this is charming and actually sounds like something that could be read at a wedding ceremony - perfect for the contest! ~ yes, i am a new yorker! (or new yawka, as we say...)

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 2:20:00 PM

    Beautiful thoughts from you Andrea here, well wishes on the contest front.."

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 2:15:00 PM

    Beautiful poem! It is more than just saying I do..for wearing a tuxedo and a white dress, eating and dancing are all good memories to create but it's way more than just the wedding day but what the days and weeks and years brings for those two beautiful soul mates...

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 9:32:00 AM

    Oh, my friend, Andrea, this is a great and excellent entry for the contest again! I have one too which I've just entered. I don't know if it's ok. The ideas came from my imagination not fr. experience, lol. I just came home from a dance practice. I want to express again my deep appreciatiation for you help/support. I hope I can make a better one next time. I have to go to bed now. More blessings to you and wish you all again the best and luck for your big wins!! Good night! God bless!

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 11:08:00 PM

    Taking hold of ownership, responsibility for our opportunities, our destinies is so vital - I thank you Andrea for this eloquent reminder of how to take accountability for our blessings - considering that I'm remaing vigilant for the woman that will make me complete I can seriously appreciate this piece - not only I Do, I Will - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 8:39:00 PM

    nicely penned Andrea....best wishes....love...Joseph

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 8:11:00 PM

    such an elegant gracious poem for the theme Andrea .. can imagine two speaking these words on a wedding day .. sweet one .. good luck luv ..

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 6:33:00 PM

    speechless,great write,your words says it all

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 4:17:00 PM

    I declare you the winner. Awsome.

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 3:40:00 PM

    A happy thoughtful write, Andrea! Lots of hope and encouragement, written in a very down to earth manner. If the newly weds are too much into their moment, they will appreciate it a whole lot afterwards! Hugs to you! Mikki

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 10:09:00 AM

    Love of two soul mates is decided by Fate and thereafter the feelings on the way of life. Wonderfully done. Good luck in the contest.Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 5:48:00 AM

    Beautiful poem about finding your soul mate... a sweet one Andrea! Good luck in the contest! Love and hugs, Jack

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 5:13:00 AM

    A lovely write with a very smooth flow to it, Andrea. And yes a very valuable message sent through, there's more than 'I do'! Excellent entry dear, good luck.

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