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In Your Beautiful Eyes

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In Your Beautiful Eyes

Amid a star ferried night loves tears came falling 

Into Your beautiful eyes, their dreams were calling

Through the whispering tides a heart left drifting

While I stood by Your side; the pain was melting....

And the moon cast her glow as a choir bringing, joy

To sweep this night with heavens Angels singing 

As I stood by Your side; these tears left falling 

Unto tides that wash away the pain; still drifting 

Afore loves moon cast a light; dreams went calling 

Upon a star ferried night; and hearts were melting....


....“In Your Beautiful Eyes” *

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  1. Date: 10/1/2012 5:43:00 PM
    Your depth of emotion is marvelous and your use of the language is masterful. To have a friend or lover like you would be a gift from the angels. Victoria

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 9:57:00 PM
    Lovely, comforting poem!

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 12:30:00 PM
    very nice poem friend Tristen... I can feel it..have a blessed day!! (^_^) Hugs!!! thanks for dropping by.

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 7:30:00 PM
    this is a very soothing poem.. nicely done...remember "to love someone deeply gives you strength, being loved by someone deeply gives you courage..." all my love... Mohini ;) :p

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 8:47:00 PM
    Beautiful rhyme poetry Tristen, when the heart alights, so many beautiful writes, your pen flows easy and your verse is sublime, may you sleep with stars beneath your pillow tonight and may you awaken to the breath of angels on your lids, love and light, vie