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Diamond Jewel

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Diamond Jewel

I met her and encountered the Gods.
A brilliant, jeweled diamond with the
dark skin of a wild oak. Her kindness 
soothed cuts to my heart like fine lotion.
Soon I was sailing to the depths of her
sea.

Arose a thunder cloud, an intruder 
after her diamond touch. With blazing 
bullets he shot once, then twice as my 
heart burst open... he stole her soul
and lied about me denouncing her
every thread of kindness

Left alone, desolate on a barren isle
I survived and bitterly flourished as 
the black storm broke my bones in 
desolation... I only remember she
was my diamond jewel.

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  1. Date: 9/26/2012 9:22:00 AM
    aww nice one... congo

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 5:07:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest Julie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 1:00:00 AM
    Congratulations Julie well done and a well deserved win xx

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 12:09:00 AM
    Congratulations, Julie. I enjoyed reading this poem. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 8:36:00 PM
    A wonderful verse...truly we are not in this world alone. A delight to read! Congratulations on your much deserved win! How exciting to be with you in the winning circle. Cynthia

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 8:21:00 PM
    Julie, Love, loss and finally acceptance alas are what we mortals are doomed to repeat. Beautifully written and I can see why this one rated so high. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 7:41:00 PM
    Julie, congrats on your win with this super poem! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 3:51:00 PM
    wow a real mysterious and power packed write! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 9:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on a winning poem.

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 9:34:00 AM
    Julie. Congratulations with your awesome win in Catie's "Metaphorically Speaking" contest. Have yourself a nice day~ LUV*PD

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 9:20:00 AM
    Congratulations on such a great win and poem.

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 8:43:00 AM
    Loaded with beautiful metaphor! Congratulations, Julie, on your win in my contest. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 5:16:00 AM
    Lovely written - touching - - Have a great Tuesday. love oxox Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 7:01:00 PM
    this is a very power poem. I hope you find another diamond. Warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 11:38:00 AM
    a beautiful write, i love the first stanza, enjoyed this one,..p.d.