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Elo

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I dedicate this poem to all people struggling in the practice of love, to the eternal flame that does not erase our heart and willingness to share life.

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Elo

When I looked into your eyes
for the first time
I saw a couple of clouds,
two swans
and a garden in color.
You then closed your eyes, ...
Desperation took hold of my heart ...
Acceptance?
My palms sweated,
My body froze
and my senses became airborne.
That's when I saw your eyes open
an emotion took over me
I became a child, adolescent and illuminated
My eyes turned fires
my hands were complements of your arms
Acceptance!
My lips were your lips.
My life became his
when we said "yes"
till death do us part.

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  1. Date: 2/2/2013 4:21:00 PM
    Max, a beautiful blessings with your creative top featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself an excellent day... I know I sure am. :-) or should I say I will at least try. Always~ & ~ Forever*LINDA

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 9:56:00 AM
    enjoyed this poem.

    Diniz Cruzeiro Avatar Max Diniz Cruzeiro
    Date: 9/12/2012 10:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the appreciation of poetry. For you in particular I say: The man makes his destiny from the moment it leaves your certainties, beyond the horizon to find the beam of light that will lead to the victory of your steps. Your friend Max!
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 8:18:00 AM
    lovely write of love and passion MAX,check out my Behind those Beautiful Eyes

    Diniz Cruzeiro Avatar Max Diniz Cruzeiro
    Date: 9/12/2012 10:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you liked my poem. The contemplation of every poet is to be read and pass on to the next good feelings. Your friend Max!
  1. Date: 9/10/2012 1:48:00 PM
    very lovely write, enjoyed,...pd.

    Diniz Cruzeiro Avatar Max Diniz Cruzeiro
    Date: 9/12/2012 10:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, I'm glad you printed something good that I managed to capture with my senses. His friend, Max!