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Descent

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Descent

How can you be with me
When I am with you
but in your minds reel?

Tell me,
how I can be without your love 
when I am with you vividly
but in my dream?

I know where the peaks are,
The creeks and the springs you go to,
to fetch your water
that flows without borders…
And I see the mountains,
Where you climb your doubts
And find your place.

Can you come down
make your peace?





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  1. Date: 10/3/2012 7:15:00 AM
    nice write Aida,coming down to find peace

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 11:22:00 AM
    Loved this one dear Aida! Hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 1:46:00 PM
    lovely write Aida,very much enjoyed this one,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 2:48:00 AM
    Aida, very well written - beautiful images come to me through your poem. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 1:03:00 AM
    beautiful imagery.... as if i were there thanks for sharing! - edwaard