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Lassie's Song

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Lassie's Song

Joyfully chasing blue tail bunny rabbits through fields of dancing daisies....

Watercolour skies in lavender hues reflecting from, the marmalade moon

Mystical monarch butterflies brushed amid glittering orange and black

Gathering around Tinkerbell with her maroon magical wands silverish trails

Waving atop a cheerful cherry blossom as calling unto Lassie from across this

Motif meadows musical picturesque scene; autumns, cresendo dreams.... 

Crossing into evanescents evergreen pastel forest with its translucent trees 

Met by a school of sprites led by Peter Pan, smiling at his girl as he takes her

By her lovely hand; whispering words as chimes in love and majestics

Tangerine notes of meridians metaphorical, welcome home.... 


....“Lassie's Song” *

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  1. Date: 9/21/2012 10:30:00 PM
    I love your poetry!

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 4:44:00 PM
    a euphoric creation tristen luv with fascinating metaphors luv .. I encourage u to enter into Catie's contest challenge as it is winning material .. best wishes ..

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 2:04:00 PM
    Nice poem Tristan - like it. Have a lovely Sunday afternoon. / / Hug Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 2:04:00 PM
    Vibrant, variegated verse... Very nice... Terry

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 2:02:00 PM
    nice and faithful description of this somewhat stereotyped, but ever-popular beast, with all the expected associations, but neatly avoiding cliche. Effective alliteration.