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Fly

fiddle foe fiddle fun
sleeping boy sleeping sun
catching fly catching none

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  1. Date: 9/10/2012 7:30:00 PM

    Another great poem.. almost like a tiny grook... Ralph... i bet you had fun catching and playing with this image... xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 5:59:00 PM

    ahhh but haiku doesn't rhyme hmmm [the boys sleeps/ in the sun his mouth open -- buzzing fly] same topic..now haiku..let the reader decide whether it flies in his mouth or not aye? Thank you so much for stopping by my writes. Light & Love

    Mason Avatar Ralph Mason Date: 9/9/2012 6:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes I try to to leave my poems open ended for the reader to imagine the meaning/outcome http://www.unbecominglevity.com/2005/06/10/can-a-haiku-rhyme/ I've enjoyed very much reading some of your poems. You're very talented. Warm thoughts, Ralph
  1. Date: 9/9/2012 5:17:00 PM

    Adorable! rollls of the tongue in a delightful way. BG

    Mason Avatar Ralph Mason Date: 9/9/2012 6:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Barbara! I was feeling playful when I wrote this and that's the way it came out. Warm thoughts, Ralph