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What's really happening inside

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What's really happening inside

When a girl,
 hears something bad,
She can hide it by...
She laughs when,
she's crying inside,
She smiles when,
She's genuinely hurt,
She closes her eyes,
to try to hide back the tears.
A girl doesn't like,
to show weakness.
If she does its because,
she trusts you more than,
she trusts herself...
Think about it...

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  1. Date: 9/8/2012 8:28:00 PM
    *.* Hello My Dear Precious Sweet & Beautiful Mohini ˜ Thank You For The Visit & Sharing A Glimpse Amid Your Beauty's Thoughts In Re Love ˜ Personally When I Consider This Beauty Tis Is A Colourful Tattoo Etched Deeply & Everlastingly Unconditionally Upon This Tiny Little Heart Of My Own ˜ Smile, Some Things Can Never Be Escaped & Other Things, Were Never Meant To Be ? I Love Your Beautiful Heartfelt Poem ˜ Beauty Is Beauty & Nothing Can Ever Hide This Truth, Beautiful Girl ˜ My Love, Tristen *.*

    Cayton Avatar Cindy Cayton
    Date: 9/11/2012 8:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Crying.. inside, fighting outside is the worst feeling ever. I somewhat agree is best not to speak at this point tristen/ or John/ what ever name you go by at this moment. I do love you because God told me too.. funny thing is I am fine without you it seems but you mess me up so badly that I can't forget you!
    Cayton Avatar Cindy Cayton
    Date: 9/11/2012 8:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes. as if you said to me: some day we will know whythe sky is blue I was meant for you. ~and you in all your faith and loving God as you do. I know you do. Do not even speak to me. I'm outta here for good. enjoy your big WIN John. You break my heart and enjoy doing so.
    Seejattan Avatar Mohini Seejattan
    Date: 9/10/2012 5:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    "a compliment is like a kiss through a veil..." thank you sooo much... i love reading your comments... love Mohini... <3