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  1. Date: 11/11/2012 5:09:00 AM

    Anger confuses the real thing. Prayer rebuilds mind to think better. Lovely expression of inherent feelings cause under different situation of life. Thanks foe sharing. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 10:45:00 AM

    This is palpable, another work of art, you truly have a gift.

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:36:00 PM

    You captured a time that we all experience and your portrayal is very realistic. You make the saying 'experience teaches wisdom' true with this poem. .

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 11:01:00 AM

    Your power of describing is sooo great. You have a lot of talent. Keep writting. And welcome to poetry soup.

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 12:42:00 PM

    A other cool write rebecca very poetic xx davidscott

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 5:14:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest Rebecca. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 8:36:00 AM

    wow!! so beautiful! Congratulations on your win! :) Leonora

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 9:07:00 PM

    Congratulations on your wonderful win with this lovely poem that solves its own problem with a special ending.

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 8:10:00 PM

    Rebecca, congrats on your Honorable Mention with this lovely poem! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 9:40:00 AM

    Rebecca :-). Congratulations with your awesome win in Catie's "Metaphorically Speaking" contest. Have yourself a nice day~ LUV*PD

    Lucas Avatar Becca Lucas Date: 9/24/2012 9:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, PD ~ Have a nice day too. :)
  1. Date: 9/24/2012 8:54:00 AM

    Congratulations, Rebecca, on your win in my contest. hugs, Catie :)

    Lucas Avatar Becca Lucas Date: 9/24/2012 9:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the Mention, Catie :)
  1. Date: 9/23/2012 1:37:00 PM

    Sometimes sleep is difficult when we recount the day's stresses. Well done. Lee

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 9:33:00 PM

    I love how this starts out full of tension and then becomes mellow and soothed just like a lullaby does!! Very nice one.

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 8:40:00 AM

    Very nice poem!Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 10:32:00 PM

    Very nicely written. I think that we have those nights when our mind is running laps inside our heads and both comfort and sleep elude us as the clock counts down the night.