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He Stole My Air My Air He Stole

My wings are nests my nests are wings,
I find it hard to breathe.
He stole my air,
winding up his words.
They replay back and forth, back and forth.
A string of thread a thread of string climb up the walls and fall apart.
Stinging scars call you here,
traumatize you.
Give me a hug,
my sweet little dear. 
Dear investigator,
He loved her not me.
I couldn't let that be.
Scornfully breathing words of the truth.
Zig Zag,
I tagged you.
Be my friend,
and i'll help you through.

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  1. Date: 9/19/2012 8:51:00 AM

    Very good poem Rachel, I like it a lot. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Peysakhova Avatar Rachel Peysakhova Date: 9/19/2012 10:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks! :]
  1. Date: 9/8/2012 7:36:00 PM

    i liked how you switched the words around in the line. interesting take on this poem!!

    Peysakhova Avatar Rachel Peysakhova Date: 9/9/2012 12:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! :)