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A one Rupee Coin and Endless Talk

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A one Rupee Coin and Endless Talk


With a one rupee coin having tiny hole to talk endlessly throughout the day to reach to you ,fulfill my goal shower love talks you can say. To talk endlessly throughout the day I tied a string through that hole shower love talks you can say bringing closer our thirsty souls. I tied a string through that hole to make phone calls without a pay bringing closer our thirsty souls from public booths on my way. To make phone calls without a pay inserted the coin holding the string from public booths on my way dialling your number tring,tring,tring! inserted the coin holding the string to pull it out after the call dialling your number tring,tring tring soon this trick was picked by all. To pull it out after the call so that I could call you again soon this trick was picked by all to make a phone call now and then. So that I could call you again to reach to you,fulfill my goal to make a phone call now and then with a one rupee coin having tiny hole. ===============000================= *The one rupee Indian coin doesn't have any hole; people used to make one to make phone calls from public booths without paying by the above method.

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  1. Date: 9/27/2012 10:30:00 PM
    Hi Kash, sorry for getting to your page so late! Oh, we loved this romantic take on the contest. Suddenly, a coin becomes a chance to hear your love's voice. There is so much originality here and a delightful tone. Thank you for your entry and a belated congrats on the win in our contest. Hugs from Cyndi

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 5:28:00 AM
    A belated congratulations on your win in Rhonda and Cyndi's "Penny Pantoums" contest Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 4:40:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work with this creative write..Sara

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 10:04:00 AM
    CONGRATS KASH ON AN INCREDIBLE WRITE AND WIN LUV .. AWESOME WORK..

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 9:18:00 AM
    This is really a fantastic write my friend!!! I love it!!!! My hearty congratulations on your win!!! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 6:22:00 AM
    congrats on your win Kash

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 1:27:00 AM
    Congratulations kash, what a clever idea... well done and a well deserved win xx

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 11:01:00 AM
    hello?... where are you hiding, bud?..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 3:30:00 AM
    brilliant Kash, wonderful poem, isn't this poetry soup a awesome place? everyday i am taught a different aspect of various cultures, and this is a gem, thanks you.........

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 6:24:00 AM
    Kash, I will give my last five footles I think soon. Since I am having writers block now and not coming up with a new poem for any of the challenges. I got up at 5 a.m. this time. just couldn't sleep. maybe I can catch up completely now!!

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 10:21:00 AM
    kashi!!...beyond smashing!... the imagery and tonality of this piece charm me all the way.. ( ohh, those phone calls evoke warm sentiments) greeat use of the form!... win it, bud!..:)

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 12:05:00 AM
    Hey, this is really cool what you pointed out about the rupee. I love that line, tring tring tring. It's fun to see how you show the ring sound. Way to go, trying out a pantoum.

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 1:47:00 PM
    hahaha. Very clever and witty write, Kash. Nice rhyming scheme. I like!! :)

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 1:33:00 PM
    lol, what a good idea to get free phone calls! Love this clever write, Kash. Big congrats on all your wins : )

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 1:24:00 PM
    ops! an EXCELLENT PANTOUM about a penny!!! i love it soo much, kash. i am so delighted while reading it. in fact, i haven't tried this form yet. perhaps i will try it sometimes. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING AND ALSO FOR YOUR PRECIOUS TIME READING AND YOUR CONGRATULATORY COMMENTS ON MY WINNING. MORE POWER AND BEST WISHES ALWAYS MY DEAR FRIEND!!!! hugs, leonora

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 12:15:00 PM
    Very good poem Kash - Have a peaceful weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 9:38:00 AM
    nice write.reading your work reminded me of childhood days,how we used to play with the coin.all the best for the contest.:)

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 9:26:00 AM
    enjoyed reading your pantoum creative write, thank you for sharing kash vie