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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:24:00 PM

    I like the image... some how rain will not stop me from trick or treating...LOL..xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 8:20:00 AM

    Love that last line surprise. Belated Happy Halloween

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 8:12:00 AM

    Having just handed out over a hundred pieces of candy for Halloween I appreciate this poem. Really like the last line.

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 9:09:00 AM

    Cute limerick carol....brings back fond memories, I think we all fell at least once : )

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 2:00:00 PM

    hope this Halloween will be much better, Carol : )

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 5:03:00 PM

    I love this time of season, seems almost magical to me.

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 2:02:00 PM

    I bet if you go to a cidermill you can find a candy apple! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 6:14:00 AM

    Nice story line, the words don't flow for me, I've tried it about 10 times and I can't get it to limerick in my head, think the syllable count on the last line is out by one

    Brown Avatar Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/19/2012 4:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I came back and read this and I agree. I need to work on it. Thank you for your truthful feelings on this one.
  1. Date: 9/17/2012 9:10:00 PM

    Nice limerick for the upcoming Halloween season. When you have the time, check out the poem I wrote for you. I hope you will like it.

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 8:47:00 AM

    very cute! I hope you find all your candy ;)

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 8:24:00 PM

    cute fun visual Carol for this holiday luv .. good luck and just read your blog about vaca time .. have a wonderful visit my friend .. we r awaiting new baby arrival on Sept. 22nd as my youngest son Eric and his Chrissie will be home tomorrow .. we r all so excited .. have fun .. will miss u much .. safe trip

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 6:21:00 PM

    all scattered,sorry about your knee,nice write Carol

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 3:04:00 PM

    Nice lim! (with unhappy ending) Terry

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 3:12:00 PM

    delightful write

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 1:11:00 PM

    wicked nice write not fr off halloween thank you for your kind comments carol xx davidscott

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 8:09:00 AM

    Carol; this is cute. Here where I live - it is usually hot, once in a while it might get a little cold. I dress up as a clown, or strawberry Shortcake and pass out candy. Have a great day. Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 6:57:00 AM

    very well penned i hope your keeping well duncan ceizar xxxx

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 11:11:00 PM

    Oh, this makes me feel like my younger sister on Halloween night, trying to keep up with us all! You paint a remembrance for me. Fun.

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 12:07:00 PM

    An interesting poem. I do not like or believe in "Trick or treat" Guess I am really an old grump. I do like Thanksgiving and Christmas and Birthdays and babies, puppies, kittens,and ladies of the night. Guess I am not all that bad, just old.

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 11:58:00 AM

    Hope that fall was not a hurtful one. I do not like that time of year and would rather just buy the kids candy and not have them go out. It is usually cold and snow with slippery walks. The grand kids just go to folks they know because grandma buys a box of chips and a box of chocolates so treats last a long phyl

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 5:57:00 PM

    *.* First I Wish To Thank Also Your Lovely Beauty, Sweet Beautiful Carol Brown, For Your Kind Visit & Yesss, I Do Very Much ˜ As For Your Precious Beauty's Wonderful Halloween Verse, I Love It & Can Relate Unto The Hurried Excitement Of A Joyful Child Upon This Night In Blessing & Fun For Many A Countless Priceless Little Heart ˜ My Love, Tristen *.*

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 3:56:00 PM

    hope you didn't hurt yourself Carol, just joking. love your Halloween

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 1:16:00 AM

    this is so cute, Carol. I can remember dropping my trick or treat bag one year and how it broke (a grocery brown bag in those days!!) Kids today get those nice plastic ones. haha. This is just GREAT.

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 5:45:00 PM

    very cute prediction of a childs halloween, just wanted to let you know that i added on to my garage sale poem i forgot my list

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 4:11:00 PM

    child like statement from the past, can see it happening, at last, little ups n downs do irk just thee, but happiness comes tween thee n me...

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 2:41:00 PM

    Halloween a fun day for the children, that's a painful story poem, I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich.

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 2:05:00 PM

    I hope Halloween is much better this year, my friend - lovely write. Have a wonderful weekend, Carol - and thanks for all your sweet comments x

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 1:12:00 PM

    This is heartbreaking. Halloween should be full of happy sweets instead of skinned knees. Touching, CArol. Love, daver

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 1:06:00 PM

    Is this evidence of a bad fall one FALL?...ooh, I hate to hear that. Yes, I have also slipped and fell on slippery leaves...I am sure the ants carried away your treats. They have to get their fill of Halloween candy too! gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 11:36:00 AM

    So sad, hurt your knee and lost your candy. Well written Carol. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)