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  1. Date: 9/28/2012 10:48:00 PM

    Hola, Yasmin,, I'm gonna leave a pretty comment on here before I smack the bee, for buzzing into the image... My eyes are wide awake, and i love the sun-lighting the hanging ready to eat apple, ,, hope the bee enjoys the taste... before I smack it.. (kidding~kidding)... okay~ i will go now, before you smack me... xox~pd

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 9:38:00 PM

    they are not sleeping 'pills" but rather, herbal supplements that are very helpful for all people, Kind of like eating garlic or taking vitamin B or something. So dont' worry. if it does me no good, It's no problem. I will try some other thing!! If life gets easier, I think it will be my solution. haha

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 1:58:00 AM

    I can visualise it Yasmin!Beautiful imagery in this haiku.

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 6:15:00 PM

    This smells soooooo delicious to both the bumblebee and ME! I can just imagine this as a polaroid shot! gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 12:30:00 PM

    I love bees and apple blossoms, Yasmin, quite lovely haiku, enjoyed it!

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 6:42:00 AM

    Hey, I see you got the Debs seal of approval on this one. It IS a darling haiku, sweetie.

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 4:41:00 AM

    yassie, thanks for your generous words!!

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 6:31:00 PM

    Yup she a haiku Queen ;) one A+ poet! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 5:14:00 PM

    a rare beauty of imagery yasmin luv .. that bee hovering is intense .. as red apple blossom ..

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 12:43:00 PM

    Beautiful haiku Yasmin. - oxox big warm hug from me :)

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 12:18:00 PM

    Very nice Yasssssssss!!! A poetic genius you are !!! Love n hugs Michael

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 8:43:00 PM

    Quite a picture you paint, my dear Yasmin... simply beautiful! Love, Jack xox

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 5:25:00 AM

    Wonderful haiku Yas. your talent's brimming over!

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 2:32:00 PM

    yeow, this is wonderful and beautifully composed, mareey... you're a greeat 'ku girl!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 8:31:00 AM

    stages of nature,great write Yasmin

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 7:54:00 AM

    So few words but with huge meanings. The sun, the blossom, and the bee. Which one is me?

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 7:41:00 AM

    A brilliantly crafted write my friend! I love this very delightful and a quite lovely poem Yasmin! Awesome piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 7:20:00 AM

    The weekend is about to begin and I am enjoying reading such amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am so pleased to see your writings posted here Yasmin. Hoping you have a happy sun filled weekend full of love, joy and inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 6:33:00 AM

    A lovely fall scene, Yasmin! You write a fantastic haiku...hugs, Rhonda

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 6:22:00 AM

    Bravo - well written Yasmin. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 5:45:00 AM

    Superb sweetie xx

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 5:34:00 AM

    very sweet:)