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  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:34:00 PM
    David, , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) TEX

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 1:30:00 PM
    i can feel your loss and pain you going through..i believe he is in a better than us in this world..its an amazing write bro..keep inspiring us

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 4:33:00 AM
    I'm so sorry, David...I did not know. This is such a good analogy, yet so sad. I feel for you. I too lost my father....well done...Thanks for all your comments. I left you a soup mail reply if you could PLEASE take a read. xxoo Holly Moore

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 4:06:00 PM
    mine too mate, he got a lung out but the stroke sidestepped and got him... cant dodge that bugger death...

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 4:25:00 PM
    Strong analogy here, poems like these and it's educational too...I will be back in gear in a few more weeks...miss chatting with u and many others on this site... a big bear hug for you and your wife!! One day at a time! luv, gwendolen

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 9:14:00 PM
    The vicious carcinomas! Deep write, touching...Welcome back David. Always so nice to have your inspiring comments at my poems. I am doing good. Hope your wife is better. Many prayers for you both that you find strength and courage to overcome.

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 10:15:00 AM
    David, How beautifully you write about this most destructive, and yes draining for all, killer. You have endured may trials (and joys). I wish you peace. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 11:30:00 PM
    I lost both parents to these brothers, and a cousin carcinoma pancreatitis.

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 7:48:00 AM
    Its good to see you online today,David.There`s a huge missing link not to see you here everyday..still keeping you and your family in my thoughts and prayers,Dave..Take Care Always,Arild

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 11:58:00 AM
    My mother slowly died from Leukemia... My father was like you, in your position. Words can never express your sadness... but you did it beautifully. Our condolences will never be enough... but they and our heart are there for you. Plus our Prayers. God Bless you. Eventually we will all be in Gods hands. Now, it's not enough as your heart tears, but he is still there. And we are, too. I see in your words your pain. Please see in our hearts both kindness and understanding.

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 10:14:00 PM
    Poignant story that reads like a live report, but with warring emotions! Well done with the prose! Caroline.

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 11:02:00 PM
    David, strong,,,,, Congratulations in Debbie's " Let's Get Serious " awesome contest. ~ :-) always a pleasure in reading all winners when I get the chance. super xox's from~ PD

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 6:11:00 PM
    I hate them too. Catie :) Soupmail

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 8:55:00 PM
    wow, here is one I sure missed seeing. A very good personification poem this is and it is filled with feeling, David. I am thinking of you and wishing your wife a speedy recovery. Congrats on this "serious" win.

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 7:13:00 AM
    Hi David great write, sorry about your loss, hope you and your good lady are ok, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 6:33:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super win in this contest "Let's Get Serious" David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 2:40:00 PM
    Lost my Dad n Sister to cancer. An uphill fight for a cure it seems. Hope life is getting better for your wife my friend. Michael.

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 2:30:00 PM
    So many kinds of cancer, simply a malformed cell and yet look at the and yours have gone through so much, I hope you have found joy too! Congrad's on your Serious verse winning. This is an important issue to draw attention too. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 9:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on win David xx

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 1:26:00 AM
    May God help us to overcome all these cancers....David you been able to educate us and cause some awareness.Sorry for your loss.Fine write,my friend...