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Liv
she took in arms I begged for give she put in saddle I long for liv
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harry horsman
Date: 12/19/2012 10:31:00 AM
love the imagery here, the mind is working on this little beauty
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 11/22/2012 5:27:00 PM
RALPH, congratulation with your featured poem of the week. God Bless, you and your family during the holidays,, always~ PD
daver austin
Date: 11/21/2012 11:48:00 AM
Different. I like it. Congrats on the selection. daver
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 9/10/2012 7:39:00 PM
The little thought here, goes a long way. It has been such an honor reading new material here on the soup. Very different.. ((a compliment Dear Ralph)) Your very first poem attracted me to read all your incoming poems. I'm not disappointed at all. I long for liv,,, Many different thoughts pass through my mind with that ending.. hope you do not mind... thanks...pd
Ralph Mason
Date: 9/10/2012 8:01:00 PM
ha ha I don't mind at all :) Thank you ever so much. I try to write my poems so that they have alternate meanings and the reader can put their imagination to work. I think your compliment is as much for your imagination as it is for my poem. Warmest thoughts, Ralph
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 9/7/2012 6:10:00 AM
Another weekend is about to begin and I am enjoying reading such amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am so pleased to see your writings posted here Ralph. Hoping you have a happy sun filled weekend full of love, joy and inspiration. Love, Carol
Ralph Mason
Date: 9/7/2012 8:12:00 AM
Thank you Carol, all my love, Ralph
L.Ruby Meyer
Date: 9/7/2012 1:19:00 AM
Ralph, what I've enjoyed most about both poems you have shared so far is that that make me go "huh"? "what?, and reread the words in different ways..there are open doors to the imagination, and I think that's refreshingly different, thank you. X Peace Ruby
Ralph Mason
Date: 9/7/2012 8:10:00 AM
I couldn't think of a nicer compliment. Thank you so much Ruby :) Warm thoughts, Ralph
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 9/6/2012 3:42:00 PM
so many ways to take this..soft smile..all of they evocative! Light & Love [welcome to Soup]
Ralph Mason
Date: 9/6/2012 6:05:00 PM
glad you liked it. I like poems that have multiple interpretations. Warm thoughts