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  1. Date: 9/26/2012 6:23:00 PM
    I like your style you care for the reader. You have inteligence but I'm looking for the gift I'll keep looking to find it. Welcome to the soup. The Situation

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 11:56:00 PM
    Perfect! You are so right with that ending.I really liked this poem. :o)

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 11:26:00 AM
    Hoping you continue to find the inspiration to write and share your wonderful poetry with us Lori. I enjoyed reading your poetry very much today. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 6:07:00 PM
    Charming write I really enjoyed it! It is rhyme though not free verse. And the ending is perfect! Light & Love