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Hammock's Swing


Hammock's swing brings out the sun half asleep I feel its warmth sea breeze touches both my eyes whispers dreams of distant lands. +++++++++++++++++++++++ Placement:4th;(September 2012) By-Kash Poet Contest-Hammock of sky in Tanaga Sponsor:Nette Onclaud 5th August,2012 TANAGA:tanaga has four lines with seven syllables each, thus, 7.7.7.7…in its traditional form, all lines are rhymed at the end, although the modern form tends to be written in free verse... for this contest, quill me a NEW, ORIGINAL tanaga on the theme ‘ HAMMOCK/S OF SKY’ in free verse (modern form, non-rhyming)… to add a little twist to this challenge, use the sense of touch in creating your piece...

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  1. Date: 9/15/2012 11:11:00 PM

    Kash, a nice sweet Congratulations with your excellent win in Nette;s " HAMMOCK OF SKY IN TANAGA " beautiful contest. ~ :-) take care* PD

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 6:02:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work with this great expressive work.Sara

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 3:51:00 PM

    Excellent write, my dear Kash! A well deserved win, my friend! Cheers!

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 10:25:00 AM

    finally I have the time to review this winners' list. Glad to see you on here, Kash, you deserved it with this gem!!! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 3:09:00 AM

    many congrats Kash for this lovely and touching write and win.

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 3:18:00 AM

    Lovely imagery in this winning poem Kash. A Big Congrats on your wonderful win!

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 10:50:00 PM

    I can feel the sea breeze in my mind's eye Kash...best wishes. One love. Joy Wells

    Wellington Avatar Joy Wellington Date: 9/12/2012 10:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tnx for your comments!
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 10:12:00 PM

    I can feel this poem, Kash...the breeze, the sun's warmth, the whispers...amazing imagery!

    Johnson-Saunders Avatar Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 9/12/2012 10:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Forgot to say, Congrats!! :))
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 4:06:00 PM

    Relaxing images Kash, whispers dreams--I like that--congrats

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 2:05:00 PM

    I could almost hear the snores ;). Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 12:01:00 PM

    Kash, excellent hammock poem, the swing really catches the reader and takes them to a different world, congrat's on your win!

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 10:00:00 AM

    so soothing i almost went inside a sweet dream, kashi... super applause on your win in my contest!..:)huggs

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 9:19:00 AM

    I feel the breeze, the relaxation, dreams whispered...magical !! Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 8:49:00 AM

    congrats on your win Kash

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 7:04:00 AM

    A cozy little nap I will take in your poetic hammock, Kash...so many sensorial images! You made the sea breeze a wonderful lover too! Always enjoy your short versed poetry the most...You left so much to my imagination! Congrats on this win, friend. gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 6:15:00 AM

    congratulations :) great poem!!

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 6:08:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Kash as I have just left a comment, this winners list is full of my fave poets, not all I admit but most of them .. xx

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 5:32:00 AM

    Finishing up packing for my vacation and thought I would take a break and congratulate the winners of the "Hammock" contest. Congratulations Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 5:08:00 AM

    congrats Kash on an excellent and exciting write and win luv .. always so clever .

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 1:44:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win, Kash!!!! :) leonora

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 7:51:00 AM

    Ironic, it may seem, Kash, you poem makes me dream of where you are in the Hammock. enjoyed.

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 2:27:00 PM

    are you saying you are a techie and a gizmo?.. come over and update my files, bud!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 2:02:00 AM

    soooo beautiful, Kash and I can feel it. I am sure this will win. Thank you for stopping by and reading my latest poem. Best wishes and luck on your big win!!! :) hugs leonora

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 6:44:00 PM

    such a soothing mesmerizing quality about these lines Kash .. luv the excellent setting .. best wishes luv ..

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 3:59:00 PM

    dreamy, beautiful!!! It's time for me to leave and I am not even finished here, Kash!

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 1:41:00 PM

    i had to ask my technician friend to do that avatar thingy for me, kashi... ohh, me and my low-tech brains, lol!.:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 11:00:00 AM

    Nice to read your thoughts today. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 6:10:00 AM

    Hoping you continue to find the inspiration to write and share your wonderful poetry with us Kash. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning while I am having a cup of coffee and starting my day with a smile. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 2:26:00 PM

    What an incredibly delightful write my friend! I am enlightened by your fulfilling poem! You've done an excellent job Kashi, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 12:45:00 PM

    This is so relaxing and gives such a feeling of warmth......ahhhhhhh

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