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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:25:00 PM

    i like the past.... i will keep it there..xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 8:00:00 AM

    It's absolute truth. A great philosophy with a very few words. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 8:34:00 AM

    Very eloquent.

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 7:06:00 PM

    Profound words! There is an old song from years ago titled "Time Waits For Noone"... Cynthia

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 5:39:00 PM

    Scary reminder our lives could be over at any given second

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 3:12:00 PM

    nice write. thanks for your comment and have a great weekend!

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 1:30:00 AM

    Lovely Monoku Carol! So full of meaning!

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 1:56:00 PM

    Yes in the twinkling of an eye Carol.." G'reat line here... yours Joe..)

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 1:12:00 PM

    they say time waits for no man cool write again carol xx davidscott

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 9:39:00 AM

    Wow!Excellent!!Thanks for all your congratulatory messages at my pages Carol.

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 6:58:00 AM

    very true lets make life worth living love duncan ceizar xxx

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 10:53:00 PM

    It is a truth,Carol.And you said it beautifully.

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 12:09:00 AM

    Exactly Carol! I thank you for all your wonderful time you spare to comment on my work. Love Dalila

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 9:01:00 PM

    Carol your words are truth...time lingers not for anything nor for anyone. Thanks for always reading and commenting my poems. God bless and one love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 5:11:00 PM

    Thank you for your amazing and thoughtful comments! YOu're much appreciate in your input on Poetrysoup! God bless you and have a great day!!! JP

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 12:26:00 PM

    Wow!! Love this Carol, you said so much in thi line.. Hope you are doing okay and that you will have a great weekend ahead.. Love Wilma

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 3:00:00 AM

    your poem is powerful It touched my soul

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 12:47:00 AM

    This is an awesome Monoku. I love it, Carol. I'm sorry if my expression of gratitude for your congratulatory comments comes only now. I've got a flu and I am still recovering. Anyway, thanks a lot!!! Have a wonderful day always!! luv leonora

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 4:11:00 PM

    carol, it's great to see t his little monoku of yours today. How are you lately?

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 2:45:00 PM

    Except for the collective force withing our soul, so true Carol, enjoyed your pensive thoughts today, love vie

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 2:38:00 PM

    So true! And thank you Carol this has povided me with inspiration for a new poem.

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 1:44:00 PM

    wow, such a strong message here in so few words, Carol. Such truth in your monoku. Have a great weekend x

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 1:44:00 PM

    The best of speech is short meaningful words. This is a powerful piece. Khalid

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 11:55:00 AM

    Not many words but they say a lot, Thanks for sharing it, God bless you.Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 7:13:00 AM

    so philosophiscal this morning Carol, and so true, once gone we cannot turn back can we? wonderful, glad i've seen this.

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 11:40:00 PM

    Insightful deep monoku...yes past is no more.

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 9:03:00 PM

    Exactly, the past is gone ... Nice and short with a deep meaning. Thank you Carol!

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 4:37:00 PM

    So very true. Though time is no more, the past, wether pleasant or not, often stays in our present minds. Very sweet verse and thanks for stopping by. :) Always, Laura

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 3:52:00 PM

    it's called death.

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 3:21:00 PM

    How true. A second is much too short of a time period.