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if these walls could talk

If these walls could talk
They would have narrated my story
How without you, I live in a constant shock
How I have lost all my  past glory

Witness to my  everlasting misery
My walls would have wailed for me
At least ,they would have made a query
whenever I am lost somewhere in me

Sharing my lonely nights
Seeing me crawl into that cold bed
Knowing all my shivering frights
Crying for me ,as if I am dead

I would  have talked to them about you
About the love we shared
All that ,that happened between me and you
About the life, when we were paired

Living  with this eerie  loneliness
The only noise ,is of a clock
With your hatred creeping into me ,as illness
I wish these walls could talk…..

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  1. Date: 9/20/2012 12:21:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win Irfana. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 11:19:00 AM
    Congrats Irfana on this compelling write! hugs

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 1:52:00 AM
    Heartfelt write! Congrats on a great win in Susan's contest with your wonderful entry!

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 3:28:00 PM
    MANY CONGRATS ON YOUR AMAZING WRITE AND WIN LUV ..

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/12/2012 4:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Linda
  1. Date: 9/18/2012 9:55:00 AM
    Well done. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/12/2012 4:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joyce
  1. Date: 9/17/2012 9:19:00 PM
    wow, a very powerful one this is. BIG congrats on your win, Irfana.

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/12/2012 4:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Andrea..
  1. Date: 9/17/2012 6:58:00 PM
    Congrats Irfana, one love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 11:42:00 AM
    Congrats Irfana on your win in the contest.Loved it!

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 9/17/2012 3:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Kash...:))))
  1. Date: 9/17/2012 11:10:00 AM
    Congratulations on your #4 win in my contest! I liked how your walls would be a witness to the speaker's decline :)

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 9/17/2012 3:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Susan for placing my entry among the winners.....?xx:)))
  1. Date: 9/17/2012 10:34:00 AM
    Congratulations Irfana on your terrific write and win xx

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 9/17/2012 3:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mandy...:)))
  1. Date: 9/17/2012 10:28:00 AM
    IRFANA, congratulations with your wonderful win in Susan's "If These Walls Could Talk..." contest.. have a nice day~ PD

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 9/17/2012 3:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Pd...:))))
  1. Date: 9/8/2012 12:21:00 AM
    Very good poem by you Irfana.Love this.Best wishes to you.

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 9/8/2012 1:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Kash...:)))