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Fresh spring cut grass separates the toes,

A soft breeze guides the air,
Gently caressing her angelic hair,

Illuminated as if even the sun belonged to this divine presence, 

Captivating gazes to my core leaving me transparent,
Eternity skips ahead leaving me to recount my woes,


Cold wood shivers forgotten slippers,
Heavy sighs rejuvenate the stale ambiance,

Consumed by an expanding shadowed audience,
Evaluating my cracked soul for pleasure, 

Left to lose all composure, 

Even the sweetest can turn bitter.



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  1. Date: 7/13/2013 1:13:00 AM
    Beautiful moment then flipped on its head......wow. Another great write...you have the ability to say alot in such few lines....thankyou for sharing....Shaz

    Price Avatar Ty Price
    Date: 7/15/2013 1:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you again, poetry's meant to be shared, iI'm just glad you enjoyed it.
  1. Date: 9/20/2012 1:38:00 PM
    TY, awe... i like the feel of your poem. i love the image of stepping on to fresh grass with barefoot. To come think of it, I'm intrigued by the way you describe this captivating canvas, and turning it to what is and will be... an amazing and unique style you have.. Not many can be so passionate with similes and metaphors.. xox~LINDA

    Price Avatar Ty Price
    Date: 9/21/2012 3:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, I really like imagery and the ability to paint a picture in your head, or at least the to able to feel the emotions im trying to display
  1. Date: 9/16/2012 8:34:00 PM
    Enjoyed your poetry tonight I chose this one to comment on, love the imagery you present, especially the fresh spring and how the cut grass separates the toes, have a nice evening, bie

    Price Avatar Ty Price
    Date: 9/17/2012 8:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the comment. Im happy to hear you enjoyed them. :)
  1. Date: 9/5/2012 1:33:00 PM
    I am so happy to have time to read some wonderful poetry today. Glad yours was one of the pieces I was able to read Ty. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

    Price Avatar Ty Price
    Date: 9/6/2012 1:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the reassuring words, it motivates me to keep writing!
  1. Date: 9/5/2012 2:09:00 AM
    You describe feeling well - A well written poem Ty - Have a great Wednesday. - Oxox love Anne-Lise :)

    Price Avatar Ty Price
    Date: 9/5/2012 2:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, hope your Wednesday is great as well.