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  1. Date: 9/21/2012 10:19:00 PM
    I love your poetry!

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 1:24:00 AM
    Beautiful poem! I fell you put much passion in your words. I enjoy your poems. : ) LUV~Sammie~: )

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 7:27:00 AM
    Enjoyed your beautiful poem Tristen, love Elizabeth xox

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 1:52:00 AM
    Wow!!! A very wonderful painting of yours which I feel and see in this poetic canvas of yours my dear Tristen. A great painter of heart indeed! i have enjoyed reading your poem and thank you soooo much for dropping by leaving your kind comment of appreciation to my experimented diamante formed poem entitled, Precious Gifts of Love. Have a blessed and grace-filled day always. hugs:) leonora

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 10:26:00 PM
    awesome poem friend Tristen...enjoy reading it...keep it up.thanks for sharing and thanks for dropping by hugs!! **Maria**

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 5:54:00 PM
    lovely poem... tells a lot about you. hope you write lots more... remember this: "love is like quicksilver in the hand, leave the fingers open, and it stays, Clutch it, and it darts away..." ... Love Mohini... :) <3

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 2:38:00 PM
    Simple flowing and beautiful, great write and details.. With love - Roxie

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 12:21:00 PM
    beautiful masterpiece

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 5:43:00 PM
    every once in a while i feel as if i've just read a fantastic poem with soul, wisdom and what it takes to show other lesser poets how to write with forethought-this is a poem that can be used as a primmer entitled "writing great poems for idiots" WRITE on girl!may the universe tap you on the should&tell you that today will be better then yesterday,and i'll hope for you it happens, after all, even the universe forgets things once in a while, like to remind people not to harm each other~free cee!~

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 1:58:00 PM
    wonderful imagery in this one, Tristin! loved it. hey! :) So nice of you to stop by my page and read and comment on my poem. Thanks, it's appreciated. Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 8:27:00 AM
    great artistic work!!

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 6:40:00 AM
    I love the use of words. I was spellbound by some of the phrases with the wish that I possessed this art. Satisfied with myself to stick with simplicity. Great work.

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 6:39:00 AM
    I love the use of words. I was spellbound by some of the phrases with the wish that I possessed this art. Satisfied with myself to stick with simplicity. Great work.

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 2:49:00 PM
    art sure can life one up, I know it has helped me! :)

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 11:48:00 AM
    I am so happy to have time to read some wonderful poetry today. Glad yours was one of the pieces I was able to read Tristen. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 6:52:00 AM
    cool poem! i dunno y but the 'blue tears' held my attention for a long time!

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 2:48:00 AM
    Yes, I can see that you are in love. - Lovely poem Tristen. - Oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 10:18:00 PM This is a link to my Sonnet writer friend from London. I thought you may really enjoy them. His name is Anthony(Tony) Baxter. He used to write me a funny sonnet, because those were the only ones I really understood. I struggle with formal English. Right a way, I thought of you, and how you may enjoy his work, take care, God bless ya! always, Lucinda (he calls me Lucy Lu)....

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 3:50:00 PM
    masterfully written, you just take the page and convey it! Awesome!!!! :) Luicnda

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 3:45:00 PM
    Beautiful, all the way... vie