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The Girl In That Hotel

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The Girl In That Hotel

I walked into that hotel -
A mere shell, devoid of sleep.
A dull day - no stories to tell,
No memories to keep.

And there sat Miss. Sparkling Eyes.
I didn't know her name;
But ever since I saw those eyes,
I've never been the same.

I sat across her table;
I saw her dressed in red.
I'll forever be unable
To get her out of my head.

Like gazing at a star,
I could silently rejoice -
In beauty, best seen from afar,
And the melody of her voice.

Now, I have a story to tell,
And a poem to show,
For the girl in that hotel,
I'll never get to know.

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  1. Date: 9/12/2012 3:16:00 PM
    very nice bruh

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 11:37:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Vijay. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

    M Avatar Vijay Daniel M
    Date: 9/10/2012 4:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Carol. I've started going through other poets' work as well and I must admit that the poets here are really good!!
  1. Date: 9/4/2012 6:21:00 AM
    this reminds me of that song where a guy sees a beautiful woman and shares a glance with her, and also the song lady in Red! Good one.

    M Avatar Vijay Daniel M
    Date: 9/10/2012 4:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ha ha Andrea. here the glance was more one-way. from me to her. no response!! :-D Thanks
  1. Date: 9/4/2012 5:54:00 AM
    Very nice... perhaps you may meet again... Terry

    M Avatar Vijay Daniel M
    Date: 9/4/2012 6:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks. Haven't been to that hotel since!! Fingers crossed though :)