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Celestial Date in Space

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Celestial Date in Space


 
Twas it happenchance or divine intervention that brought us to this place, this time this plane of purest desire we share…. Just north of the moon, past the fourth star crossing over Orion’s belt we soared… entwined, likeminded, and very much inclined in our sincerest direction. Meet we now, on this date, blessed and anointed for this journey and those ahead. Hear now the celestial bodies herald, with reverence, the brilliance of light this joining has shed, as we swirled together near the presence of the masters design. Two spirit filled, enlightened souls lead by faith, alight in words of hope spiraling together near the visions of ancient worlds and beings caught now in time and space…. sheer energies of enlightenment. How bless we are to join this gathering, as we dance in our celestial trance amidst the wisdoms of past worlds. By: Debra Squyres

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  1. Date: 3/8/2013 8:17:00 AM
    lines four and five of the second stanza. you have a habit of breaking a sentence off half way and finishing it on the next line. this is fine when done as part of the rythem but you only do this every now then once or twice a poem. it really is a pet pieve of mine so i am sorry if i am harping on it but it really does lessen the effect of the poem.

    Squyres Avatar Debra Squyres
    Date: 3/8/2013 8:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Made a correction... my breaks are often used to slow down the rhythm.
  1. Date: 10/8/2012 12:17:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Deep Space" contest Debra. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 12:15:00 PM
    Well worth the read. Loved it. Congratulations on the win.

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 7:12:00 AM
    Great write, Debra. I love the way you described things, e.g., Just north of the moon, swlirled together, two spirit filled souls, energies of enlightenment, to name a few. I see your Christian attitude showing through. Thanks for your comments on my space entry too.

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 2:23:00 AM
    great write friend Debra. congratulations on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 7:21:00 PM
    well penned....enjoyed....congrats on your win Debra

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 4:30:00 PM
    SUPER CONGRATS DEBRA ON A FANTASTIC WRITE AND WIN FOR A DEEP SPACE ADVENTURE LUV .. HOPE U R WELL ..

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 4:25:00 PM
    DEBRA, congratulations with your awesome poem in Nathan's "deep space" contest.. enjoyed~ xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 3:49:00 PM
    thanks for the support' nate

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 12:18:00 PM
    Glorious place you have described well Debra, I enjoy the way it feels so ecstatic!

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 7:56:00 AM
    Shall we dance?

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 6:47:00 AM
    very interesting poem!

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 11:32:00 AM
    A moments glimpse into forever where two souls share something so clever. Enlightened by a cast of angels who bless their union that entangles. A wonderful evening to walk in the heavens.

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 10:45:00 AM
    Your words sound like music to this poem Debra - Gorgeous as it always is - xoxo love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 10:06:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this very interesting and creative work..Glad that I chose it to read..If all couples were spirit filled with the right Spirit that is, life would be so different..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 10:00:00 AM
    a divine journey where words are lost in space through wondrous ways... so, so lovely, debra...:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 6:31:00 AM
    Beauty personified through your words Debra, I travail this passage with you, enjoyed reading this first thing in the morning love vie