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Friend

Friend who?
friend you?
a voice in a silent room

Friend why?
all this time
you couldn't even say hi

Friend of convenience
when I'm around
not when I'm a stranger in town?

Real friend
not you
you are solitude!

Remember me
as before
tomorrow, I will be gone!

You couldn't even
take your car
you couldn't drive to see me far

Friend in theory
or in Facebook
you are just a memory of my past

Friend I know
now that I leave
you are just a memory in a dream ...

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  1. Date: 9/4/2012 1:11:00 AM

    nice write Carlos, drive me to think about my real friends and friendship :) thanks you ...SK

    Mongrut Avatar Carlos Mongrut Date: 9/4/2012 7:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sukmawati! :)
  1. Date: 9/3/2012 7:04:00 PM

    Very poetic. Like this.

    Mongrut Avatar Carlos Mongrut Date: 9/3/2012 7:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much Sherese! Sometimes friends aren't who you think they are ...